explanation in SBS (5 years and 3454 days ago)
- 1: the skater
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Motion blur (5 years and 3811 days ago)
Not enough refinement on this piece.. I can see the skateboarder, but I don't feel the motion or the perspective. You've got the shape down, now work on making it more refined.. good luck
thnaks for your comments. I will do the changes.
good work
nice job
I think motion blur should be used more and on the entire pic - otherwise the scateboard looks stationary
Good Luck
good job ...good luck you need it..
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Cool idea, and distressing the left-side railing edge is a nice touch. But the shadow created by the skateboarder is not consistent with that created by the right-side hand rail. I like the graffiti, but it doesn't feel as if it's 'on' the wall [too intense], especially at the grout line between the blocks. I think more, and maybe more colorful, graffiti would add a lot -- and might even be a more compelling focus, relegating the skateboarder to a secondary role.
Apart from what Dan says, I think there's something phyisically not completely ok. The way I see the source image, the skater is on the top of a wall (and not on the stairs itself). The arm from the skater however is already at the front of the right wall, while his arm is behind the body. I guess that arm wouldnt be visible from that angle. Just that . Good luck!
nice one but i'd have to agree about the shadows....goodluck
I have made a little adjustments according to your comments. Thank you.
all the best to u author ........... nice idea .............
much better!..
Fantastic job author...simple but great...best of luck
best of luck
Wow, very nice idea!
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