Pretty ok . If you mirror the cigarette, it will get the same light as the skull. And up to you, but I might have blend the under jaw from the skull a bit more with the ash so that the jaw really becomes part of the cigarette. Maybe with a bit of fading and smudging you an get that effect. But again, only if you want that. Good luck!

thanks wazowski
look i had updated it

Very very nice image.. good luck!

thanks ponti

very kool its like a bong gone rong lol

ververy cool image i just love it!

like an anti smoking comercial... great work

Nice job on the smoke.

Too much background draws the eye from your image...crop a bit.

hahah cool

what demons eyes (:

the unearthliness of the Daz/poser studio creatures are just haunting... this is an effective use of them.. they just look so evil undead feel to them... like a crack addict barbie doll

haha her eyes are scary! good work

i like that u made the dress black; looks so much better thatn the white one

Nice work on the dress if you play with your V3 skin,eye & hair settings you can get her to look much more realistic...

Not bad combination, but why not put her right hand in front of the dress. That'll look way more logical. Good luck!

This is quite shabby!!! Yuck!!! Poor me!!! Must ve done better!!!

needs better blending, good luck

Yeah!!! Did in twenty mins!!! Will try!!! Thanks!!!

'o' is invisible in 'smoking' - it will be 'smaking' or 'smucking' or 'smrking' and i k n o w someone can read from this even 'smbking'! fun! good luck!

quite the ugly.. can't really look at it to critique.. good job author.. now I gotta go revisit my lunch.. URP

Well its definately on theme, thats a really bad smile. Ok, so where are the sources? The ones for the teeth, lips, man?? The one listed for the cig - check with a mod, I am not sure its a legal image.. Nice idea. GL.

I'm not sure having colour lips on a monotone image is working...or the text on the image...but it's poignant and gets the message across...

Cigarette needs to be darken a little to blend better gl

Concept has potential. The headline text just states the obvious so it doesn't add anything.

Thats a hideous smile!!!! suts the theme.... but the work could be much improved... GL!!!

i agreed with Tapiona ...good luck!

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Erm, if the picture is black and white should the smile not be also?

nice theme

Yuck i think i would faint if i saw such thing in real lol