The lighting is very discordant between the woman and the background, it looks like a bad studio set up. The shadows on the model are far darker than the background, and the dark edge along the bottom of the image just emphasizes the discrepancy. Perhaps you can adjust the levels on the woman to brighten her up a bit, or find a "moodier" background that is as dark and heavily shadowed as she is.

Are you saying all the rest of the source pics are your images? You need to place them UNCUT in the SBS.
Step 2 "vampire" only shows a tree.

what a really neat creation, very fun visual

very good blend author.. GOOD LUCK!!

nice author good luck...

the house seems small.. the lake should be more frozen and snow on the trees too.

shadow of the house too strong... should be similar to the bottom left corner

I figured their might be a couple things wrong with it thanks for the feed back. Spent more time trying to find the natural resources. I will try to make some adjustments of the adjustments ya mentioned .

I'd get rid of the ski-lift towers. They emphasize how out of proportion the shack is to the background. Without them, it could just be a small fishing shack or outhouse in the wild...
Also, the snowfall is a bit too thick for a bright sunny day...

Made some changes hope it looks better now

hahaha, very nice

Some thinks you might consider:
some parts are a bit too blurry and I also think the background should be replaced.
GL !

thanks i thought same thing
this one is not good
i need to spend more time on it

Great image. IMHO I think you just need to define it with more shadows. Good Luck.

Wow, this is really unique. I like it =)

Agree with EmiK.....nice job!

Very nice compo, I like the mildness of the image.

Nice idea.

Fabulous work author...every details is just perfect....very well done

very cool

nice idea, i like it

my first reaction was 'what the hell?' but this is an interesting piece..

Congrats!!!

Thanks erikuri.

Congrats! for 2nd

congrats

Congratulation on your second place...your work was my favorite...well done

congrats! my favourite as well! great idea!

Congrats!!