on the left side of the girl it is looking like a cut out... its the lighting thats doing it too her so not your fault see if you can play with that spot a bit to blend into rest of image goodluck, its a nice image.
Very nice image! You could make it more dramatic by adding shadows on the outside of the girl, there's a lightsource on the back which can justify that. And you can use the orb as a lightsource coming from the front which lights the front of the girl. This will attrack more attention to the inside of the image.
very nice chop but i think light on the face shouldn't´t be so intense beside that wonderful job, good luck
author says:
Her face wasn;t so intense originally, then i applied the soft glow effect, and i liked the fact that her face was that bright because it made it seem like there was a real surge of power from the Orb, and that looked kind of nice to me. Thanks for commenting though
I don't understand the title. A soliloquy is a dialog by a person as if they were alone. i.e. " To be or not to be...". Destitude isn't a word. Destitute is poverty or having no possessions. Curious as to what you meant. Image is interesting, girl looks a little washed out. Try as robvdn suggests that would improve the effect.
author says:
Destitude has meanings beyond poverty, such as destruction or pain, and mixing it with a soliloquy added class, i was creating juxtaposition, this can also be seen withe colours in her hand, representing fire and water - other juxtaposing elements. Thanks for commenting
bro is what i think ,now is better,but before light in her face was too much white, but this is wonderful image u know that i just try to "help u a bit" but i know that u are an artist and u dt need help, regards my friend
very nice, I just want to say, i dont know what that thing is halfway down the statue for the ball but it looks like the edge of a sidtable or something... please get rid of it o.o; its bumpy cut out at leats it looks like that., i think without it ur image looks way better... holding off my vote for now..
on the left side of the girl it is looking like a cut out... its the lighting thats doing it too her so not your fault see if you can play with that spot a bit to blend into rest of image goodluck, its a nice image.
Very nice image! You could make it more dramatic by adding shadows on the outside of the girl, there's a lightsource on the back which can justify that. And you can use the orb as a lightsource coming from the front which lights the front of the girl. This will attrack more attention to the inside of the image.
Just a tip
Thanks guys i'll try to fix that
very nice chop but i think light on the face shouldn't´t be so intense beside that wonderful job, good luck
Her face wasn;t so intense originally, then i applied the soft glow effect, and i liked the fact that her face was that bright because it made it seem like there was a real surge of power from the Orb, and that looked kind of nice to me. Thanks for commenting though
I don't understand the title. A soliloquy is a dialog by a person as if they were alone. i.e. " To be or not to be...". Destitude isn't a word. Destitute is poverty or having no possessions. Curious as to what you meant. Image is interesting, girl looks a little washed out. Try as robvdn suggests that would improve the effect.
Destitude has meanings beyond poverty, such as destruction or pain, and mixing it with a soliloquy added class, i was creating juxtaposition, this can also be seen withe colours in her hand, representing fire and water - other juxtaposing elements. Thanks for commenting
wow nice i like the whole fantasy genre
I love this! Don't change a thing! Bravo!!!!!
i liked it very much. fine work...
Good, but the lights in the hands should be reflected in the ball...
bro is what i think ,now is better,but before light in her face was too much white, but this is wonderful image u know that i just try to "help u a bit" but i know that u are an artist and u dt need help, regards my friend
Nice image! I agree with cmyk that the light should reflect off of the ball. Otherwise, a solid entry.
very nice, I just want to say, i dont know what that thing is halfway down the statue for the ball but it looks like the edge of a sidtable or something... please get rid of it o.o; its bumpy cut out at leats it looks like that., i think without it ur image looks way better... holding off my vote for now..
nice work yes it looks better without that table thing
love this style of work. no other comments that have not already been highlighted .. GL
Creepy!! i like good luck
Thanks everyone, Eladine - i made some changes
nice
i like the lighting
Beautiful composition!
Howdie stranger!
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