Creative idea. I would move the open card forward and closer to the closed card. Cropping out a lot of the unnecessary background might make the text legible without going to hi-res. The "(open)" is wholly extraneous [I'm sure even stalkers know how greeting cards work ]. You start out by saying "no words will ever be enough," but words are what you're offering. I would replace the "so..." line with something like "but let me try..." Also, I would start only the first line with a capital letter and I would put a comma after "feel."
@DanLundberg: thank you for the suggestions... You are right, but now it's kinda late for me to edit it more, I just cropped it a little. But I'll keep in mind your good advice for further entries! Tx
And thank you all for the comments
Very funny!
Pretty good Nicely done
Creative idea. I would move the open card forward and closer to the closed card. Cropping out a lot of the unnecessary background might make the text legible without going to hi-res. The "(open)" is wholly extraneous [I'm sure even stalkers know how greeting cards work ]. You start out by saying "no words will ever be enough," but words are what you're offering. I would replace the "so..." line with something like "but let me try..." Also, I would start only the first line with a capital letter and I would put a comma after "feel."
Nice...lol...good luck author
Some guys deserve this kind of card!
@DanLundberg: thank you for the suggestions... You are right, but now it's kinda late for me to edit it more, I just cropped it a little. But I'll keep in mind your good advice for further entries! Tx
And thank you all for the comments
great!
So funny!
nice and funny
Funny....GL
haha... this is funny... gl
nice
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