Sun is directly in front, so the sunbeam wouldn't be at an angle.

Yep, looks better!

Cool overall effect! great job

Great coloring, i like the way you made her dress look like silk.

i agree, very nice work on the woman, on the outside, try to make it a darker blue and maybe make some of the galaxies and stars different colours to add variety.

Interesting idea with lots of ragged edges...

I like space grandma. But like CMYK46 said some ragged edges. You should work on window panes.

Thanks for your comments. I am working now on the window panes and I will fix the colour of the sky. Will update my entry later.

I fixed the window panes, darkened the sky and added some colours to the stars.

it's like she's waiting for somone from outerspace to come pick her up.

I think you did a great job!! Maybe next time make the sci-fi sky the usual color, black. Then you can make some blueish/purpleish gasclouds and some bright stars wich bring the light into the room.