(5 years and 3103 days ago)
The hardware store sign is skewed at too extreme an angle for the background image, it looks like it is "floating" separate from the building it should be attached to at a 45 degree angle. It is also too warm in tone compared to the other lights in the scene, and does not show any of the "glow" effect of the other lights.
Other than the glaring inconsistency of that sign, this is a very nice image, and a good effort.
suggestions:
1) improve shadows, if light source from top, the shadows should be alittle bit..
the 'houses' look like floating now
2) add people, since it is a street
3) add a dark to light color for the floor too
Howdie stranger!
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