(5 years and 3013 days ago)
A little transparency to the smoke could be helpful so you can see the figure better.. nice concept (the pills and the gun are a bit lost... might be because they are very small.. high res you can see them fine,,, but I think the noose is enough information.. if you remove the pills and the gun and lower the noose (enlarge just a teeny noodge to give it more umph) I think the balance would be fine.. BUT THAT IS JUST IMHO... making the noose more prominent and a bit lower into the image will balance out the yin yang of the black and white theme
Good Luck and Great Job!!!
If you distorted the blue striped man on purpose, please explain.. he really takes over the focus due to the obvious distortion/malformation..his butt is a dead give away.. IMHO it would be better to put him back or at least correct the distortion.. if it was your intent to make him more Creature then Human I would understand, but it takes away from the wonderful work you did on the Referee... Good LUCK (High Res would be helpful to see the work closer)
The extreme distortion of the one wrestler is distracting, and you've placed the ring ropes on the left to intersect the top of one of the knee wraps. I'd forgo the strange back and butt distortion, and reposition the ropes a bit higher.
I'd also strongly consider repositioning the referee. Either the warped wrestler is standing on a box, or the ref has no lower legs...
I am not sure what to say about this that it is not said already but best of luck author!
Howdie stranger!
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