Great concept, but the perspective angle of the swing is too skewed for the angle of the arch. Either the kid needs to be more face forward, or the arch needs to be angled.

Sources are not usable. Please read http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

@Mossy i had trouble with that becuase i could not figure out which way it was faced. the two bases of the arch are the same width and obviously the sun is coming from the right. but i could not figure out the angle of the arch. i tried my best though. :/ haha

@CMYK thank you very much for nothing that.!!! i have fixed it. appreciate the care

You might want to consider a different swing source. Here are a few:
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=60368
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=3910555
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=3910505
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4775508
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4226660
http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=4852980


(You'll have do do a little chain work, 'tho...)

Author, these sources are still not usable. Please read http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

CMYK NOW i have fixed the problem, i apologize I'm very new to this site and I am still feeling it out!! I thank you for your time

Great rework! Don't worry, it gets easier with every contest you enter!

Author, you finally got it right...good luck to you!

Thanks CMYK hahaha.. im just new to PXLeyes so im still getting used to it. sorry for the inconveniences. !!

Nice job with the lighting effects

Thanks!

interesting work

very nice work on the rope -- great overall look

I wanna swing tooOOoOoOoO

very cute... .., I would like to see some eyes... (whic is your specialization.. )

Lovely, lovely work ... there is a sweet joy to this one ...
How did you create something with so much feeling that doesn't have a face?!!! Great work.

adorable ............. really creative n awesome work

Very nicely done! I love the details on the pasta

Fantastic work author...well done

Adorable, reminds me of an old country toy.

basic wind filter + basic tools.. Author it's nice but if I were you I'd add a little more too the entry !

Just advising you..
Gl though

totally agree with Nickk

Thanks guys I don't know I came up blank on this thats why I did simple but here's a little add on Any better?

try breaking more glass, more small pieces

Why onions have reflection and the cracks not?