It would look more interesting if you could include some color.

MossyB Thanks I added some color may not be right colors but does look a litte better than it was

you can do better...... good luck

GL

very nice work,great coloring...only thing that is wrong is shadow...light is come directly from the back of the pineapple,so shadow have to be in front...fix that author,this work is great...best of luck

Thanks Erathion

Corrected the shadow.

Nice entry!

Tropical pineapple as a building form in the desert is an interesting concept. I'm afraid I'm going have to disagree with erathion, however. The light in Source 1 seems to be coming from the front more or less and the pineapple is lit similarly (as is still evidenced in the highlights in the leafy crown of your current entry). SBS Step 5 has good lighting to my mind, but nevertheless has some other problems: Pineapple shadow needs to be sharp, not vague, consistent with harsh desert light. Doorway arch needs both right and left sides. Similarly, faux right-side window arches require faux left-side window arches. (My solution would be no faux window arches.) Make the lighting more dramatic like your current entry (but without letting the pineapple blend into the background and without the black border). I think the interior ladder should be moved to the right so it's only partially visible -- or maybe just delete it as it seems kind of unnecessary without more interior light.

Thanks everyone.

Have made few corrections/changes. Hope it is fine now

Very nice image author. Like it

very cool!

Good image

Good one

thats really good art

love it..... interesting job....gl

Congrats for the 4th place

Author, very cute your Korean doll! Gracious... GL!

this is cute

Very nice work...good luck

GL

cute doll .............. all the best to u author .......

woooot!