Very realistic work author...i like gray scale choice...gl

She was so serene...
Author, there's a flaw in the dark side of her "jaw"; I particulary prefer natural proportions, but... GL!

Thanks for your comment erikuri but that really is of know help “flaw in the dark side of her "jaw";

What is the flaw, too big, too small, not in line, not dark enougth ect ect i can't fix it if you don't tell me what it is........

you should fix the slight bump in her jaw (below her ear),..i think its what throws off the proportion a bit. otherwise good job!

nice job!

Really good job.....but her one fang is on a different tooth than the other one. gl

Made a few changes……

Many thanks for your comment Krystain, but I think this is a pretty accurate interpretation of what the face would be like if the face was elongated/deformed like this.

Many thanks for the comment gejopo, but I was unable to move the tooth back, as there is just not enough room to fit it in my chosen outside sources.

I welcome all comments good bad and the ugly, but I would like to point out that if you can see any details in the dark side of the face which is jet black. Then at best guess you monitor needs to be re-calibrated. I do this sort of work and 3D modeling on a freelance basis I can not afford for my screen to be incorrect.

Whether the face is supposed to look like that in a vampire (although I don't think there's a specific vampire design guide to ad-hear to) but the mouse contrast is not looking good. I think in this particular design, color would have been a better choice, IMO.

Great blending of the parts, author. And that is one heckofa fang!

nice one

Nice composition. But I don't know, I feel that hook's perspective is a bit odd comparing to the bars... maybe a slight adjust can solve it. GL!...

@erikuri Hadn't noticed that but now you mention it ... aaaghhh lol

Remove the shadow from the building in background.

Nice idea, I like it a lot. Agrees with CMYK, remove the shadow behind the hook, and also - motionblur the hook a little, ´cause the perspective of it makes you feel that it´s swinging towards you. GL!

Added a bit of motionblur on the hook to 'fix' the perspective issue - thanks sunzet

This is one of the better entries! GL!

The man in the forward is tad blurry. The man in the middle needs to be flipped 'cause of lighting source and the man on the left needs a shadow.

YESS ! GOOD JOB ! G L

very nice idea!

Very nice idea. I'm not sure if the viewer is supposed to be looking up or not.

Thanks all

He's a pig-fish face with cherries on the head! Committing a sin: gluttony. Eating what? Sashimi?
Just a small thing, author: you forgot to colored his knee, and some places you painted over, some places are lacking color. What a boring girl I am!
GL!

got it erikuri, thanks!!!

GOOD LUCK !

very cool author...hehe

o my o my o my,how u achieve to create eyes like this author...very well done...gl

Creative. Expression is great

Creativity Scale Rating 10/10 how do you come up with these ideas........

She got the sunlight! Nice effects!... But I'd prefer without all those blood, just a little was fine IMO.

Thanks for your comment erikuri. The reason for the amount of blood is that she has just bitten someone.

good luck !!

Cool idea, and post-prandial vampires would seem to be the ultimate in drama IMO. Necertheless, the fried-face portion seems more on top of than into the skin in the eye/nose portion—but maybe that's somewhat of a misread on my part because the smoke edges are just too strong.

well, the blood is very gruesome

A higher res would have been nice.