Figure's a bit blurry. If you were trying for a motion blur effect, IMO it didn't work too well. The action pose of the figure is great, and so is the title! GL author.

thanks, is my first motion blur effect,

The trainsformer looks pretty cool, but would it be an idea to let him skate (right?) on the rails itself? If so, you could flip the background image to let the track fit with the trainsformer's foot. And maybe -but that's of course up to you- you coud make the background & doggie a bit smaller so that the robot looks more massively huge and impressive. Good luck!

thanks Wasowski, good ideas, I try to use the dog smaller but i don't like too much.... but I love the idea about skate.

Alrighty, though imo the dog does ask quite some attention (size and pretty bright) eventhough it does look funny in the image. About skating, I mentioned to flip the background, but on second thought you did make the composition pretty ok (trainsformer as one diagonal, train tracks as opposite diagonal), perhaps the image could be a bit cropped on the right side. Anyway, in case you want the TF skate on the tracks, perhaps you can adjust the right (for viewer left) foot a bit...Good luck!

I did. decreases the dog and took the blurriness of the robot...

Much better, author...I can believe he's skating on the rail.

Love this work!! impressive..
high marks author!! GL.

Nice atmosphere, but the kid's a bit too dark & grainy compared to the rest of the image.

Thanks for your feedback!
I made a few changes, think it looks better now

Looks the same to me.

Its not, trust me
I like it this way..
Thanks!

It looks ok,,,, but you could give the kid's face a little highlight. Good luck!

Thanks George55!

Even if the train were at the correct angle, it's wider than the aqueduct, and there are no tracks...

i tried but i wasnt able to add tracks

pls make USEFULL commentS,

Author you should try change the angle of the train, it looks like its placed wron.. if u turn the angle further hes about to fall of if you turn it the other way then u may get it straight. Also I would make the train smaller so it would fit on the edge of the wall. Pehaps you will be able to create your own trackes with just drawing lines and plank images. I like the black n white setting u have made here, also where does the grass/plants, the sky and the moon sources come from? I dont see them listed. If you created them yourself please do show in your step by step

Author, the kind of feedback I gave you should be very useful.

the bridge n train's perspective not right, improve on the contrast, now alittle flat (not much tonal changes)

not u CMYK there was sm1 else cmnted, sorry

i used brush for the moon and stars, i dnt remember the site, was long ago. search u ll find it...

except the train and brdg evrything else is brush

VE DONE WITH THE SOURCE URL, IS THERE ANOTHER PROBLEM?

u changed train source but u didn't changed the train )

man go to Flickr.com find a train and replace the one in your drawing, http://www.pxleyes.com/blog/2009/06/how-and-where-to-find-legal-source-images/

is there any prblm now?

thanks for d link

Much improved from what you originally uploaded. Listening to the critiques offered will often help you improve your entry, so don't take them as an attack, take them in the spirit they are offered, which is to help you.

finally u got it right this time. Good luck!

cant check your first source.. link dont seem to work for me

Ok, should be good, thanks!

Pretty cool.

Link one doesn't lead to image used.

That is the train that was used. It is a working link.
It is from this set here: http://www.public-domain-image.com/transportation-vehicles-public-domain-images-pictures/trains-and-buses-public-domain-images-pictures/steam-locomotive-train.jpg.html
But putting this set link in doesn't seem to work for everyone so I've had to link directly to the image itself.

The image makes no sense, because you've put the "dead end' BEHIND the engine, not in front of it...Interesting idea, but it just misses the mark a bit...

The link you added works for the train. You've got 2 different light sources: Light on clouds from upper left, light on sign & train from upper right. Suggest flipping the sky background so they match up.

OH! Great catch CMYK46! I'll do just that! Thanks, you are very helpful!

Also, the sign is behind the engine because engines usually go fast and stop slow. Hes going to drive off the edge to his doom. Its showing that the driver did not see the sign in time and is still going. Poor guy :P

Only if he's backing up. Perhaps you are not familiar with older locomotives, but that engine is facing the viewer, not the broken track behind it...

Haha, I did not know! Oh well, I guess hes backing off the cliff. Anything possible with PS!
Thank you for telling me, I will use this info for future reference.

thnx author for fixing the link and yeah lol thats exactly what I was tryign to see before i was going to comment on it.. hes goign the wrong way and can not possibly read that sign :P

its all good.. so much to think of when creating an image.. GL