lips look a bit like the candy-wax lips they used to sell at the candy store. they need to be better blended with the source. as do the teeth. i'd say for the blood, make it come from the tips up wards, instead of her gums down...it looks like she has a bad case of vampire-gingivitus. bit into something not quite fresh? anyway... the skin tone is okay. i think i'd have made her eyes more vampire-ish. You've got time to fix it up still Good luck.

i agree with jadedink

there, i did some remake.. more suggestions? i did eyes too, little bit yellow and some red capillaries in it..

thx for sugestions btw

her look is so intense..good job on the teeth

i just don't know what more to do so she'd look more dramatic and frustrating..

She got the sunlight! Nice effects!... But I'd prefer without all those blood, just a little was fine IMO.

Thanks for your comment erikuri. The reason for the amount of blood is that she has just bitten someone.

good luck !!

Cool idea, and post-prandial vampires would seem to be the ultimate in drama IMO. Necertheless, the fried-face portion seems more on top of than into the skin in the eye/nose portion—but maybe that's somewhat of a misread on my part because the smoke edges are just too strong.

well, the blood is very gruesome

A higher res would have been nice.

wooooo ! like this !! g l

cool

Not bad, but looks too much like daylight.

Smiling girl with red eyes, but not a vampire to me...

completely agree with cmyk

Skin should be pale/ashen, not blue. More dramatic shadows and maybe some liquify to harshen the mouth expression might give a greater vampire feel.

I think you should have put just a tad bit more into the effect. Fangs I think are a given. Better luck next time.