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There are some very good parts, but the overall image looks quite messy and it's difficult to grasp the concept. I would lose the ground from the 'roof' part and leave only the clouds hanging there. Could also help, if you would blend only a finger or two of the hand into the 'screen' .. Cover the black background with something and fix the blurriness of the table and screen from the left side - and the perspective for the table - and this will be a good one.
ok widiar i have make the changes that you adviced me to .thanks for taking the time to give advice and not to criticies like many are doing here instead of helping and learn from eachother .thank you
Whoa, that was quick. There are still some minor tweaks, but let's wait what others have to say. Looking a lot better into my eyes already, now it's easier to grasp the idea of your box and screen. I like how people are innovative and try new ways of creating OOB images, this is one of the good tries. Remember we only give suggestions according to our taste, thou sometimes there are some 'laws' like with lightning and shadows. I always appreciate when ppl try and improve the pictures. You can always say 'I tried, but it didn't work or made it worse' for my comments, I'm sure some of my/our ideas sucks totally when we see the end results
I know you made a kind of popup image from the monitor screen. But IMO I think the flat image would be better, now it's a bit confusing to me. The effect of the hand get inside the screen is very good, but as Widiar said, the top is noticeable only in hi res. Of course, it's your entry, and doing (or not) the corrections is up to you. GL!
I really like the idea here, but I didn't really understand what was happening until I went to full view. I think its because you used different angles from the same shot. What I'm trying to say is it might look better if you didn't do different picture angles and instead used the normal shot and tried to make a glass box instead. I can visualize it in my head and would love to try it, but it was your idea and I wish you luck with it.
ok im gonna try to fix it i do not understand the glass box butt ima try som thanks
wow, this entry is getting ripped to shreds by comments...gosh, give the author a break...very interesting idea author
Just trying to help.. for me this is one of the best ideas so far on this contest. It's a sign of a good entry usually, if people comment it a lot and give ideas to make it even better.
thanks widiar thanks to every body for taken the time i hope its better like this
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Not bad, but I think Donald Duck needs arms (and if possible another hat ). Good luck!
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i thought i would leave it without arms cause its a living cartoon contest , i had leave it this way to keep it so real as possible cause ducks doesnt have arms but if there s more people that think that way that he needs arms i would think about it to change it , and for the hat i ve look for the donald duck hat but didnt get a good one ..............more comments about the arms are welcome they would help for a better result
double whammy
Hmmm... I can see where your argument lies with Wazowskis comment... (but I agree with him)... however... do you plan on giving him wings... ????
Since the idea of the contest is to make your image as much like the cartoon character as possible, he should have arms.
ok hope its better now thanks
Much improved with the addition of arms.. great job author
You`re not new to this author, you should know the rules................. arms/torso, hat & eye not usable ....http://www.e-maniacs.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/03/donald_duck.jpg
ok fixt
Now that Mickey's been added, I wish I could lower my vote.
do what ever you want man im not eating from this
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