This is a perfect example of "less is more"...source 1 depicts this prefectly...this image makes me feel I'm looking at someone frantically attempting to escape a dandruff storm...

lol

I like the colours, but i agree about the chaos in the image, don't completely remove those sparkly things, just tone them down a bit. Good luck!

ok...done

Ahh, much better, it's a lot less cluttered now, good luck!

Yup, looks better...

The girl kinda look likes she's getting donkey punched from behind... and part of her foot is missing...but I get the emotion... very nicely done.

love the changes. nice colour usage. good image.

woodztockr, i thought so too, but the foot is there.. it's just almost the same color as the background. check the high res but her skirt and leg do seem a bit trasnparent..

elficho, u were right. They are not anymore...Thanks !

Went back and check the high res, it is there, once again nicely done.

nice to see an image that is uplifting and not so dark, i love your spirit!