It's so dark and monochromatic, you can neither make out the differences between all the sources you used, nor appreciate the wide variety of different items creating the foodscape.
Carl Warner lets the food be the landscape, not hide it behind overly dark values. Perhaps lighten it up and allow some of the real color to show.

do u think that step 9 will be ok?

step Nine is much nicer then the dark version for being able to see the actual food.. IMHO

EDIT: Much Improved!!!

Thanks a lot Drivenslush!, I'll change it

I would drop the pizza, and I would go back to step 9, desaturate and colorize a little bit. If you blur the farther away parts and the farthest even more, it'll give it some depth. Also, in an actual landscape, the farther hills and mountains are from the camera, the gradually lighter and duller they look. Check out this picture you'll see what i mean

http://www.redbubble.com/people/natureshues/art/2059066-blue-mountains-sunset

I think you have the pieces and everything for a great entry, just needs a little tweaking hope this was helpful, best of luck!

Changed it, hope it's better now!

WOW! What a difference that made! MUCH much better, I'm glad I waited to vote. High score from me, you've done a wonderful job!

YAY! Absolutely great! What an awesome improvement! You take suggestion extremely well

Thanks for your comments

simple and powerful ................ it needs just the website URL .......www.pxleyes.com

oh....... sry i forgotted..
thank u...

very cute one, i giggled when i saw this... nice job

The blue spot behind the logo makes it hard to see the Pxl letters, which already have the black edge cutting off part of them. I'd make it much lighter so that the logo has a better contrast.

lovely work author good luck
cool idea

From a distance, this just doesn't really do much for the eye. The website address is overwhelmed by everything else going on, it's just too small and indistinct. It would have been better in solid black than lightly outlined blue. It's an original idea, but not strong enough visually.

Blue on blue, heartache on heartache. )

CMK46 Do you like that any better?..lol Thanks

Looks better to me. GL author.

Much improved with the contrasting color.

veri nice

Hey Thanks all for your comments ...CMYK46 as always Your comments have bought me to where I am today through the years You and others....Thanks

like the colors man good luck

Thanks kushpatel .

I like the text, looks like a newspaper. Gives the impression of writing about the travel.

ya good work man good luck

It should be "a year", not "an" ...
Otherwise a very nice entry! I like the "mailing tube" airplane!

Love it

Love it

thanks MossyB, I've done the change. You guessed it right about the airplane

nice author

hehe..man...reminds me d movie
great idea author
superb work

thanks and bingo kush.. the movie was the inspiration for me behind this.. was keep on thinking of the different ideas then from nowhere I got this title 'around the world in 80 days' in my mind and that gave me this idea.

nice work author

thanks