36 comments given:
avatar Aloisnin
Aloisnin says:

Very good work with the lighting, it like its compensating for the minor flaws of texturing. If you place a UVMap on each of the planks, you wont get that stretch effect you can see on some of them. Also, I can see some polly collision on the planks shaped like a cross. This is some very simple adjustments which can result in a top notch entry, even tho its bearly a slum scenario

I really want to see this great work after those minor adjustments. My favorite

(5 years and 3263 days ago)

blue lagoon
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Aloisnin says:

what software did u use? and can u put up a SBS for the clouds too? Looks like Ozone

(5 years and 3265 days ago)

qwertyzx
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Aloisnin says:

congrats=)

(5 years and 3268 days ago)

Apples on a Whiskey Barrel
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Aloisnin says:

Incredible model. The model is perfect but, maybe to do some work on the light and shadow. Then you will have yourself a 100% realistic scene For starters, maybe put a small amount of blue in the light color

(5 years and 3271 days ago)

Apples on a Whiskey Barrel
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Aloisnin says:

Great job if this is your first time with 3ds. I suggest lower perspective and maybe edit some shadow settings. You obviously know the concept of keeping it simple, thus realistic

However, the walnuts are a bit too big and im getting the feeling that the paper plate is not all paper, if u know what i mean

I like it, but hope to see some updates!

(5 years and 3271 days ago)

Nuts
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Aloisnin says:

I like this one. The glass and eggs looks real. I suggest making another background. Its a small task, but the improvement willbe crucial. Maybe on a table with a blurred out background

keep it up!

(5 years and 3271 days ago)

Chicken Glass and Eggs
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Aloisnin says:

impressive

(5 years and 3273 days ago)

I Am Kinght
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Aloisnin says:

gz

(5 years and 3289 days ago)

Over the hills
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Aloisnin says:

The stomach is amazing!. Nice model and textures!. To make it even better, you could try doing something with the box it stands on

keep it up!

(5 years and 3293 days ago)

Cast Iron Stomach Award
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Aloisnin says:

I also get the feeling that the face is floating infront of the tree, and not a part of it. I think sharper edges would make a difference here

(5 years and 3601 days ago)

old tree man
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Aloisnin says:

What happened to the right side of the tree? fixing that and remove the light rays and its will be closer to perfection (in my opinion)

(5 years and 3601 days ago)

old tree man
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Aloisnin says:

lets just hope that people dont forget this is'nt a how-sexy-contest

(5 years and 3603 days ago)

Shooting Practise