This is a very nostalgic peice (showing my age). I'd recommend making a layer with one laser and then duplicating that layer so they are all uniform. Then change the color and angle of each one. Also, you might try adding an outer glow and a little bit of noise to your lasers for a touch more realism. Finally, the dancers shadow makes him look two dimensional. Try blurring the shadow a bit. Good luck.

nice done,lovely dog you have

uh,............ I think you meant BRIBED . . . . .

I would work on the perspective of the letter and the box of colored pencils. You might want to try to fix the edges around some of the hanging pictures as well. I can see the original paper on some of them.

I agree with nator.lighting is wrong,calm light on the jeep a bit....gl

nice sentiment work author.

I'm just wondering why you picked a background that's so gritty and pixelated? Even in low res you can tell.

nice idea but i thinnk you need to work on the shadow of the dog.. instead of useing the drop shadow. make a duplicate copy of the dog layer select the 1st layer by pressing ctrl+click then go to select modify and feather and fill with black ctrl+D to deselect and then work on that layer as your shadow .. its one of the main ways i do it . g/l

Yeah, i agree with CMYK46 there... The shadow is definitely wrong

Don't you see the cast shadows from the railing at left??? Where is the wood lightest? On the LEFT side...shadows are on the RIGHT side...the light source is on the LEFT for cryin' out loud.

top of the handrail abruptly ends too. great concept

Change the shadow...light source is from left. Foreground edges of railings are cut off...

I like the simplicity of this.

Oooh. Pretty!

If port holes are on the right side of the ship, are they called Starboard holes? Nice job.

yes the changes look much better since i first viewed you work. GL

i agree that shadows would improve this image. great idea nice use of source

it's really too bright

Much better on the grass. Needs probably some blur to match better but it's better than it was before. Thanks for taking my criticism.

It looks very 2-dimentional. Some shadows would have helped.

Doesnt look really realistic.. and you can see you've just copy-pasted the boxes and bottles.. need some work ..

The resolutions between the copper canisters and the background are really different. I would suggest cloning some of the real grass, rather than making artificial grass. Just using blur will help the differece in resolitions.

these changes are HEAPS better author. GOOD Luck with the SON N LAW

very nice

very nice

very nice

very nice

nice

I completely agree with Scratzilla.

I hope you dont mind a little feedback for improvement-remember it is just my opinion: explore the shadows on the extra people you have created. maybe shadows on the ground- use light source and shadow from building as reference. also explore the shadows around the feet. On the UP SIDE this is a nice entry and meets the theme very well. A TIP: How to create shadows: create a brush from your people. using TRANSFORM & Warp to position shadow on ground... you may like to check with other commenters to see if my opinion is on track. GL

I'm going to huff and puff.. good use of source.

nice creation author. GL

simple but visually interesting.

nice concept

Humorous idea...and boy does he have his work cut out for him. If you transform some of the leaves in the height only...it will help.

PErsonally, I think it would of looked better if you used the lightening in an outline of the hands and sphere and maybe make the hands holding the sphere.

Please upload next time in high res so we can see the details of your chop. Thanks

Nice idea!

Sorry i dont think the colour combination is so good.. When i looked at the picture first time it was like .. ANOTHER COLOUR! .. It kinda not fits in .. cool idea tho.

It's got some kind of dizzying affect to me! The bricks on the ground give the illusion that the wall is really far away. But the bricks on the wall are so big in comparison that the wall must be miles high! But then with the photos of the planes the height of the wall kinda makes sense. I like it!

gud work

good thing you've replaced rake and bins. they look really great now and fit perfect. the pile is excellent. makes me wanna jump into it.

Fabulous!

Awesome!

Cracks are much too large, but good idea...

nice, I wouldn't have it applied on the door though

Ummm...no.

pretty nice =D

where did the hands come from, need a source link please.

lol, nice idea author.