looks extremely fake. something a noob would do.

I think he looks better, but get rid of the shadow on his highlight side.

Warp the letters to the folds of the shirt.

he is not smiling anymore

te body of the other player is before elvis bit his head behin? something wrong i gues?

Author, the face in your source looks pretty good to me! Give it another shot.

Try to work on the hair...compare to source. There's something with the face, too...it looks distorted somehow.

No doubt you're IMPROVED

I had told you before! This is just my view. I'm could be wrong. GOOD LUCK

What a cruel girl... But the girl doesn't seem looking at the man, he needs to be slightly behind (or up). And unless this lake has a hole inside, he is too much near the edge to drow, IMO.

Girl looks somewhat different from the image. This is just my view. I'm could be wrong . GOOD LUCK

Blue guitar is amazing...best of luck author

awesome!

Very pop art! I love the colors! Nice one...

the girl is falling and the man is laughing ).

cool

Looks better, and is also a more natural pose for him this way.

Light source on man is opposite light on rocks.

try adding a white background tp the frame on right side, n as far as the pen is considered try blurring the tip of the pen , its a good entry, gud luck author!

Romantic... I like the mood.
The man's image is a bit distorted, comparing to the original; and the rock over the girl's head is a bit transparent.

Erathion is right; you need at least masking between frames and behind the small one to make the image look like OOB. Flip the big frame horizontally too, as Tucker said. A different color of background inside the frames will make the difference! GL!...

Pen point is in sharp focus, so the writing under it would be too...

Very nice idea author...gl

the perspective of the frame that is nearest is wrong but other than that, cool image!

IMHO this is not OOB image,this is hand that write through empty frames...any how,good luck author

I would've likee to see the white level on the paper a bit higher and maybe a photo filter to pull it all together. Good luck!

very nice ! good luck

nice ! g l

awesome!

Now the ball makes sense! GL, author!

very very cool work author...i like the improvements...good luck

Technically pretty well done, but as erikuri already mentioned I dont get well why the ball is behind the frame. The shadow from the frame that falls on the ball makes the ball also more flat. Is it an option to let the ball go out of the frame instead? Good luck!

Nice! But why is the ball behind the picture, not in front of that?

interesting

You could have worked on the edges better.

very creative!

i think its a cool image

Unfortunately I have to agree with the rest of the flog here.. would be better without the nails. But very good work with the bowl..

I also think the image will have more impact if only the bowl is colored.

The idea and work are pretty convicting well done! I agree with Toothpick134 tho the orange nails are not adding anything to the image I would say they are detracting it.

I'm not sure, its my opinion, but I think that you have an amazing entry, but it would be even more AMAZING ( I think) If you didn't make the nails orange.. But thats just me.. Still very good work

Agree with CMYK46 plus the light on the boy needs to be increased and shadows will need to be added.

the rail and rope has a shadow, the boy should have one too.

ummmmmmm, different...

The kid should look like he's on the deck.

I think you should have made the tie appear to wrap around the mailbox. Other than that, it's a unique entry. GL!

nice subtle image author just a suggestion though i think it would be a nice touch to change the flowers from the woman's hat to the source flowers? good luck!

Author I assure you are just as skilled as Kevin, if not more. It's a subtle chop but still nicely blended. Just ignore people like Kevin, for that kind of comment is worthless. GL!

it took mde a while...but i got it ...cool image author!