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avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

It's good... but there is a few problems with the high res IMO...

I'd loose the noise in the back ground... I understand the sand flying around... but there's none in the foreground so it's only half realised...

I think the edges could be darkened up a little... and where the sand is blowing off him... it looks good on the smaller pic but o high res it just looks like streaks on the BG... so some sand 'on' his fingers ... maybe only some are formed??... It just needs to look as though it's breaking away from the sandman...

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Sandman
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JamesD says:

Really Nice... but some of your lines need a little work on the left side... around the sword and folds in the jacket... I'd also suggest you darken the inside of the sleeves.

also:-

the gun on this shoulder ?? I'm not sure about that... there's nothing to suggest it's slung... just added

and:-

I think the squirrel and ship needs to be moved slightly further apart... the middle 'pole' (not a boat expert :P) should ideally come to the second 'third' for a better composition... or atleast move away so the ship doesn't go beyond the squirrel... the little bit poking out is just off putting when you're looking at the details on the main subject.

Nice piece and great mood!... good job!

EDIT: Just noticed it doesn't have a tail... I'd put that back in... as it's a squirrel.... ???

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Jack squirrel.....or mouse.?..
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JamesD says:

can't fault it too much, except with the light being in the distance and as harsh as it is... the light wouldn't be hitting the foreground as much as it is, so would be in more shade... unless of course there are two suns in which case it's perfectly justified :P!

Nice piece though!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Raven
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JamesD says:

I think the gap in the mist where the woman is, actually spoils the work that's gone into it...as it stands now...

the front hand needs to be blended in more at the bottom as you can still see the straight line, I'd also push the temple thing on the left further into the BG as your composition is leading your eye over to the right.

(5 years and 3338 days ago)

Kingdom of Heaven
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JamesD says:

nice work but the cartoonish eyes are off putting and not as well blended as the rest IMO.

(5 years and 3338 days ago)

A gift from the space?
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JamesD says:

Yeah British gas that's what I thought.... I would suggest maybe making the planet appear more spherical though.... great image!... or maybe not... nah just leave it!

(5 years and 3339 days ago)

On The Farm
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JamesD says:

this also lacks depth IMO

EDIT: Someone want to justify the thumbs down??... it's a fair comment!!!

(5 years and 3340 days ago)

Amber Horse
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JamesD says:

nice but you clearly haven't read the rules of use regarding your saddle source from DeviantART.

(5 years and 3341 days ago)

When We Think...
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JamesD says:

your perspective on the 'box' is all off... try using the vanishing point option to construct it

(5 years and 3341 days ago)

Destination-Peaceful planet
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JamesD says:

try taking a picture of a moving fish... (or find a picture that hasn't been taken with a quick shutter speed (as the goal is to make it realistic - not what 'we' think it would look like); Analyse the shot, and then transfer your findings into your image (not literally of course)

(5 years and 3341 days ago)

Missed Me!
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JamesD says:

I think the removal of the car is vital... the bus is parked infront of that car and now the bus is blurred at the begining of it's journey so much that it looks like it's already been moving at a specific speed!

(5 years and 3341 days ago)

way to the beachhhh
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JamesD says:

can you refer me to a link to an actual shot of a baseball being thrown at highspeed with a trail... so that it can dis-prove my comment on that then?...

(5 years and 3341 days ago)

Fffffast Ball!
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JamesD says:

the pumpkin could use a little texturing...

(5 years and 3342 days ago)

Halloween night
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JamesD says:

the mans arm would also be blurring as it would still be moving while the ball is travelling... also would the ball really be so perfectly round?

(5 years and 3342 days ago)

Fffffast Ball!
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JamesD says:

just looks like a shark with a tractor beam...

(5 years and 3342 days ago)

Missed Me!
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JamesD says:

I like it!! but my advice would be this -

the harsh light from the sun, (right of the castle)... would mean that it have more shade than the objects in front due to the fall off of the sun.... the objects in the foreground would benefit from ambient and bounced light... so you would see more detail. Of course moving the sun more to the right would justify the illumination of the right hand side of the castle.

I think you could construct a base for the angels to sit on, as they still look cut out... and redifine where the highlight and shadows are especially as they look they have just been copied and mirrored across...
drawing a triangle out from the sun should help you roughly determine where the light would most likely hit the other objects...

front pillars are feathered a little more than they need to be (inside edges) and are far too dark compared to everything else re the suns fall-off

The man also needs to look more 'grounded' as he too looks pasted into the scene.

But even still I think it's one of the best entries thus far so GL whatever you decide to do...

(5 years and 3348 days ago)

CASTLE
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JamesD says:

heavy reliance on stock brushes when a better approach would have been to make them or achieve the same results within photoshop itself...

(5 years and 3348 days ago)

Lightening Queen
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JamesD says:

man that's a lot of scales... looks good but you could have made the wings a little bigger... good effort none the less! GL

(5 years and 3350 days ago)

The Climb
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JamesD says:

I don't quite 'get it'... there is an idea behind your piece I take it, but I'm obviously missing it...

(5 years and 3350 days ago)

Theory of Lengthwise Rolling
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JamesD says:

Nice... its a good image it's just a shame you didn't manage to define certain edges or give depth to certain parts... I know there isn't much time to change it but it's still a good effort... goodluck!?!...

(5 years and 3350 days ago)

Hot Head
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JamesD says:

better still why don't you place the picture of the Cameleon in your sbs like the rules tell you to do!?...

(5 years and 3351 days ago)

COOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!
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JamesD says:

Nice idea but think there is way too much water falling off the stool... which when looking at the force that the water is coming out at... doesn't match and lets that part of the concept down... If you can find a balance between the two then it will look much better IMO!
Also... GL!

(5 years and 3352 days ago)

MELODIC FISH TANK
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JamesD says:

Nice... but as far as I know... you're not allowed to 'sign' the work submitted...

(5 years and 3353 days ago)

Flop Eared Dragon
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JamesD says:

sbs?

(5 years and 3353 days ago)

entity
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JamesD says:

I can't find any credit given to the nude model author... other than that... great image!

(5 years and 3355 days ago)

The Happening
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JamesD says:

SBS?

(5 years and 3362 days ago)

monster forest
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JamesD says:

source 1 is protected from work outside of DeviantArt... you're going to need to show your notice of permission in your sbs... when you do one!.

(5 years and 3362 days ago)

Fallen Godess
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JamesD says:

Good reaction at first but looking more closely there's a lot of pixelation and artifacts... also and more importantly, there is what seems to be a duplication of the lions nose behind and slightly off the right- between the top 'nose' and the feet... which has part of it missing in the middle. I think some shading from the head onto the lions feet below is needed too.
Also... you could contract your selection by 1 or 2 to get rid of the white outlines that you have in some places...

(5 years and 3362 days ago)

Resting Lion
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JamesD says:

that's one phallic nose!

(5 years and 3364 days ago)

Der Beakmeister
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JamesD says:

I think hope is the butterfly... am i right?

I think the hands need to be less jagged in places and maybe the eye would look more sinister with the lids slightly closed in appearence... you've made a good start...

(5 years and 3364 days ago)

there is hope
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JamesD says:

nice image...

(5 years and 3364 days ago)

Music Gnome
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JamesD says:

excellent... finally something a viewer gets to decide on... well done!

(5 years and 3365 days ago)

Whats in the box?
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JamesD says:

hmm... i think you've used the wrong background then... might be better to show it in situ. also you might want to think about the type of base you've given it... because it looks like a suction cup... ???? EDIT... or a bar stool base... If you want to keep the base I think you ought to show some bolts or something fixing it to the ground...

(5 years and 3366 days ago)

TT10 - Turret
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JamesD says:

Nice image... but for me there are a few nit picks... your cutting out of the woman could be slightly cleaner, and I wish you hadn't used the other contest source for the box... a major flaw IMO.
other than that the colour is good!

(5 years and 3366 days ago)

No way back
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JamesD says:

WMD don't have to be huge!... you just expect them to be huge... most weapons are huge because they have to be fired (missles etc) so all that is housed within including the payload... the actual destructive element inside that weapon can fit inside a matchbox.

I personally liked the idea of a table top WMD (it looks like a suction pad am I right??)... the idea of a small weapon with tremendous destructive capability appeals to me more than a large one... but that's just me!

GL though

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

TT10 - Turret
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JamesD says:

yeah I've seen those, but it relies on the riders balance... I guess the star wars universe is technologically advanced, but most look like they could work... I think the AT-ST's have an element of feasability... it walks, shifting it's weight over to the placed foot and has stable feet... I'm not dismissing your entry... I hope you do well with it... looks like you did a lot of work... im just personally not convinced by the design thats all... but it's not real so it's elementary!... GL!

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

GAT-AP
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JamesD says:

Looks good BUT the design is totally un-balanced and wouldn't be able to move the way you've depicted it... it would need much larger wheels to support the cockpit, and they would need to be at an angle to keep the vehicle stable...

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

GAT-AP
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JamesD says:

Am glad you changed the sources!! would have sucked if it got pulled!! - GL!

(5 years and 3370 days ago)

Dick Dastardly
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JamesD says:

I think he is missing a nose...?? High res would be nice!?!.

(5 years and 3371 days ago)

RealSponge TweedPants
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JamesD says:

could be a remote controlled boat...? lol

(5 years and 3371 days ago)

Penguin castle
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JamesD says:

I think you could have put a lot more effort into acheiving a more detailed and believable face, right now I think the difference between the head and the body are apparent in terms of realism... facial parts could easily be constructed from your source images to give it more definition and marry up better with the rest of your scene... just my opinion

(5 years and 3372 days ago)

Betty Boop
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JamesD says:

Liono wasn't dipicted with a lions head though... I think in the end he would have looked more like Vincent from Beauty and the Beast (TV series - you know the one with Linda Hamilton in)... !?!...

(5 years and 3372 days ago)

Liono
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JamesD says:

Hmmm... I can see where your argument lies with Wazowskis comment... (but I agree with him)... however... do you plan on giving him wings... ????

(5 years and 3372 days ago)

hey wat
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JamesD says:

I would have liked to have seen more of the character rather than a close up of his face... it's not really capturing the sense of bringing the character alive, but that's just my opinion...

(5 years and 3372 days ago)

He lives in a pineapple
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JamesD says:

Nicely done... even if I do detest the use of deviantart stock...

(5 years and 3375 days ago)

Magician
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JamesD says:

Shadow isn't too convincing... gotta agree it needs pulling in vertically... also just a nit pick but the shadow wouldn't be oval either... based on the light hitting the bottle...
oh one more thing... the message might be conveyed better if there was a bottle either side of your 'brand'... just to show the difference visually... ??? just an idea!?!...

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Wine
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JamesD says:

Nice... much more convincing... GL!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Sophistication
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JamesD says:

you left me off the box!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Official artist
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JamesD says:

It's a shame you've kept the trees 'cloned' and not made and differences to them individually as the rest of it seems quite well put together...

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

painted
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JamesD says:

I think the bottle text needs to come more towards the light... and I think the text is the same as the headline... from what I can see... ???

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Sophistication