20 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar UglyBOB
UglyBOB says:

This thing shows up in my nightmares sometimes

(5 years and 2308 days ago)

Raised by nature
avatar UglyBOB
UglyBOB says:

The teeth definitely need improvement. Ok chop otherwise

(5 years and 2308 days ago)

Prairie Demon
avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

I think the horns would look better starting further onto the head that right at the back, and the teeth seem a little too white (could use some definition to individualise each tooth and gums?)

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

Prairie Demon
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Creepy cool!

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

Raised by nature
avatar spaceranger

You do have to show links for all sources used. If the smoke brushes are from the site you indicated the link should be http://www.brushfx.co.uk/tag/smoke/ since it's the only smoke brush set shown on that site. If this is correct replace the link in your entry.

If the texture of the tree shown in your SBS is from a disk you should show a screen shot of the publishers statement and preferably the title of the texture from the information on the disk. As it happens the texture is available elsewhere and can be found here: http://www.freepik.com/free-photo/wood-texture--gray_611189.htm This link should be acceptable since it is the exact same image.

Correct your entry as soon as possible to avoid receiving a warning. Double check that you've shown all sources with the correct links.

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

Raised by nature
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

If the smoke is from a set of brushes, just a link to the brush set is good.

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

Raised by nature
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Source for smoke?

(5 years and 2312 days ago)

Raised by nature
avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

For me no problem that the statue is dark, i think it fits perfectly with the Tron concept. Something that cóuld do with an improvement are the neon lines. You want to make a hi-tech outfit, but imo these lines should have the hitech eel. Which means smooth tight lines and not wobbly as they look now. I guess you used a simple brush for that, while the use of the pen tool (with the option "stroke path" ) can be thé solution to make cool non-wobbly lines. Check here to read more abouth using the pen tool http://www.tutorialchip.com/photoshop/photoshop-pen-tool-basics-part-1/ (scroll down for the use of stroke path. Btw the 2 pairs of eyes are a bit too much for my taste, or at least the red dots are a bit hard to define as eyes. Good luck!

(5 years and 2454 days ago)

It lives...
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Interesting idea, but too dark...figure is hardly visible against background.

(5 years and 2459 days ago)

It lives...
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Needs SBS.

(5 years and 2460 days ago)

The faces of death
avatar sienly
sienly says:

that's make me remember my lovely story..
"Rapunzel"
good idea !!

(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar oziipop
oziipop says:

I really like your grass and bugs

(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Much better now...GL author.

(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

Good job, have you got a high res?

(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

Good job on your entry

My opinion:

You cropped too close to the tower, and not treated the image as a scene which would work alot better!?....

If those are stars then I think adjusting the levels on a noise layer would give a better effect, you could then highlight the ones you wanted to pop out with the standard star brush set to screen or lower the opacity slightly - or just leave it - totally your own taste

If they are glow bugs, a soft brush set to screen, then white also set to screen to intensify the inside of the glow.

I second what CMYK said about the hair.

EDIT: you changed the hair, it looks worse than before! keep the original as a base and clone in sections from the top, with a soft brush so it's a hint at detail along the length!



(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Links need to lead to specific image used. Morguefile has changed its layout. The image URL now appears in the popup window, at lower right.
IMO the brushes on the tower don't work. The hair effect is good, but it's sharp at the top & blurry lower. It all should be as sharp as the top part.

(5 years and 2469 days ago)

In a tower far, far away...
avatar chinmay
chinmay says:

Fix edge parts ..

(5 years and 2473 days ago)

We hate creatures!
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I voted, the idea is not bad, it could be a winner with the right editting skills. You should try harder, and always learn and perfection your skills. Good luck!

(5 years and 2492 days ago)

Dark uni
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altoxis says:

Maybe you could use a narwhal horn,i found this one :

http://www.everystockphoto.com/photo.php?imageId=6206897&searchId=1b551a09c4b040546b0f2c54fa7b70b9&npos=11)

GL author !

(5 years and 2492 days ago)

Dark uni
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This 100% ... author, you have very nice friends )

(5 years and 2492 days ago)

Dark uni
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Don't panic author!, they will not kill you for just that you have made a little mistake, enjoy the work you done and don't read the bad comments. I think is spectacular. I voted for u 100%.

(5 years and 2495 days ago)

Dark uni
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Source link is to the download and not acceptable. Links must show the page with the image and the usage rights for that image, correct link should be:
http://markopolio-stock.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=168#/dlaa01
Source image is previously manipulated and can't be used.
Go to:
http://www.pxleyes.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=3933
Here you will find links to help you learn how things work.

(5 years and 2496 days ago)

Dark uni