18 comments received ( finished contests only ):
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congrats .....

(5 years and 2304 days ago)

iPhone 28s
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Congrats!!

(5 years and 2305 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar TorDoni
TorDoni says:

I just saw this today, don't know why I didn't see it before, GREAT GREAT entry. Congrats of well deserved first.

(5 years and 2305 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
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Congratulations......

(5 years and 2309 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Congrats!

(5 years and 2310 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar DanielaOwergoor

Wonderful job, congrats on your well deserved win!!

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
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Congrats!!

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar UglyBOB
UglyBOB says:

This is really cool... Good luck

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar UglyBOB
UglyBOB says:

Great take on the theme... I love the abstraction

(5 years and 2311 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar DanLundberg

Clearly Photoshopped per the contest requirements, but I wish I understood the point of the image. The title makes sense without the little you. Alternatively, a little you also reaching for the apple with a new title could be intriguing (and more fun).

Given that the title references the iPhone, it should be crisper to stand out more.

I think replacing the variegated apple with a more-solid-colored red delicious or golden delicious apple would add a smooth texture and a stronger focal point.

The shadows are too strong IMO. The little you has a much more intense shadow than the apple. The slightly vague arm/apple shadow (that inexplicably extends far into the bottom left corner of the image) is way too expansive.



(5 years and 2311 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar RickLaMesa

nice job with the details

(5 years and 2313 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

Good job author, good luck

(5 years and 2313 days ago)

iPhone 28s
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Clean up looks good, nice work overall!

(5 years and 2314 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar JamesD
JamesD says:

I can't see the images in your sbs... just a progression of your work.
you should place each original image uncut as a seperate step, this way it's much clearer.

(5 years and 2314 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

You might want to smooth/blur a few hard/ jagged edges.
Author, you need to post each of your photos uncut in a step-by-step guide. (SBS).
5.3. Use of Personal Images as Source: If you use your own personal images, the uncut source must be placed in the step by step with an explanation that it is your image.
Please take time to read http://www.pxleyes.com/guidelines/photoshop/

(5 years and 2315 days ago)

iPhone 28s
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good image! (I think we'd see the oar in the water).

(5 years and 2316 days ago)

The Colorful and Unreachable Life You Call Aquarium
avatar RickLaMesa

IMHO means"in my honest opinion"

(5 years and 2323 days ago)

The True Girl on Fire
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

No comments yet? Hmmm...this is a well made image except IMHO for the composition. GL author.

(5 years and 2325 days ago)

The True Girl on Fire