Very nice, but the focus is a little soft

good idea and lovely colours, just wish it had a little more DOF

I really dig this photo..good work

I must agree with crystleclear, the picture just is a bit out of focus. As far as constructive criticism for this point, just take the shot again, perhaps with a tripod to keep the camera completely steady.

As far as lighting, the picture is too dark; it could use stronger lighting. The angle of the light is excellent though, and I love the coloured shadows. The object itself is just lost to darkness and blur.

Really Crystle? Yet another one of your comments that is strictly critical and offers no element of value or constructive criticism. If you cannot assist the author with advice on making the photo quality better, then don't say anything at all. Didn't your mother ever teach you that if you can't say anything nice, then don't say anything?

I am new to this photography stuff so I don't have lots to offer as far as advice goes. I am sure that some of the others will offer some more technical advice.
Good Luck Author!

Do u knw to praise any1 "Crystleclear"?

the lighting is awkward author, and its slightly oof

lol! thats so mean! i love it!

It's hard to tell what I'm looking at.

I like the ghost image of the person, but wish the rest was in focus

Hunger? Yummy? Yuck? Not sure what this makes me feel but it is fascinating! I can almost taste it ... and I am not sure if I want to or not???