192 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar cabldawg71

lol this is great . Looks like the frog is enjoying the splat.

(5 years and 3548 days ago)

Lunch
avatar blindscientist

I like this one! It looks like the fly was smashed against a piece of glass. I especially like the spit/guts spraying... Nice idea, and nice job on it. Maaaaybe you could add a small shadow (burn) between the two tongue pieces, to create a shadow above the top one. Just a thought. Great work and good luck!

(5 years and 3548 days ago)

Lunch
avatar ricky777
ricky777 says:

cool execution!

(5 years and 3549 days ago)

Lunch
avatar fatz8016
fatz8016 says:

I think this is a great image...good idea and well executed..GL!

(5 years and 3549 days ago)

Lunch
avatar gamemastertips

I see what Langstrum is saying, but I can forgive any problems with the DOF. The picture is meant to look cartoony and caricature-like from the start so I don't think the DOF is too much of a problem. IMO, of course. Very creative and very well executed. Good luck, author.

(5 years and 3550 days ago)

Lunch
avatar Geexman
Geexman says:

Langstrum is right about the source and DOF, however IMO I would perceive the blur of the fly (legs and wings) to be motion blur. The fly would be the only thing moving rapidly at that point, so although closer would be the most blurred.....Great entry

(5 years and 3550 days ago)

Lunch
avatar langstrum
langstrum says:

Your main problem is the source for the fly is the photo with shallow DOF but the frog's one is not. Imagine that if you place anything behind the fly, it will become blurred (so your image is wrong in term of DOF, Depth of Field). You can fix that by blurring all the area behind the fly or re-create the blurring part of the fly (mush tougher). However, the idea is very good

(5 years and 3550 days ago)

Lunch
avatar ricky777
ricky777 says:

she's on steriods!!!!!!!

(5 years and 3555 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

I think a better source image would have eliminated a lot of your problems to begin with.

(5 years and 3555 days ago)

At the Beach
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mangoa says:

what a great idea funny

(5 years and 3555 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar erathion
erathion says:

Nice one...gl

(5 years and 3556 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar hereisanoop

i like this...

(5 years and 3558 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar langstrum
langstrum says:

The idea is good, I really like it, but execution needs some improvements. Looks like you're hiding some mistakes on the layer of the father by blurring. You can say it because of the DOF, it's alright, but I can't imagine the father is not in the same plane with the child (because the his shadow is as sharp as the shadow of his kid). Moreover, the right hand of the father needs to be recovered, looks like he loses fingers. Just my opinion, don't take it offensive. Good luck, author

(5 years and 3559 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar Lamantine
Lamantine says:

lol... funny

(5 years and 3559 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar elinoree
elinoree says:

That is really cool, however, I wish the baby were in the same focus as the rest of the picture. Everything has a nice Gaussian blur to it and that baby is just crystal clear. Evening out the tones and sharpness of the three main items would really add to the painterly quality of it. Nice job overall though for sure!

(5 years and 3560 days ago)

At the Beach
avatar Barnacle
Barnacle says:

lol :P

(5 years and 3566 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Nice job for only being 12. Just remember author that not all constructive criticism is constructive.

(5 years and 3566 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar ricky777
ricky777 says:

looks pretty cool! i agree w/ cmyk on the branch though

(5 years and 3568 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Actually I was never even thinking low image quality. It's a great entry. GL!

(5 years and 3569 days ago)

Stuck inside
avatar Barnacle
Barnacle says:

Name calling ? lol

(5 years and 3572 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar Barnacle
Barnacle says:

How would you learn ? Don't waste your time masking tree's. Like I said, get a pre masked tree or don't use a tree. You worked hard at this, I can tell, But if you spent your tree masking time on effects or some kinda surprise it would pay off better. Not being a smartass, honestly, I bet this comes last or second last.

(5 years and 3572 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar rakib888
rakib888 says:

hey i'm not saying that your thunderbolt is so unreal.ok...but when a thunder hits any place the area get lightend

(5 years and 3573 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar rakib888
rakib888 says:

you could use the lightning effects to make the thunder more real

(5 years and 3573 days ago)

Church of Darkness
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jola says:

Interesing

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Stuck inside
avatar Barnacle
Barnacle says:

agrees. You could have used a pre masked tree from deviant art or download mask pro

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Bad masking on tree, bad perspective...branches wouldn't be behind the church.

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Church of Darkness
avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Stuck inside
avatar liviu20xx
liviu20xx says:

interesting

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Stuck inside
avatar Kid
Kid says:

Nice, but maybe show the T.V. frame in front?

(5 years and 3574 days ago)

Stuck inside
avatar ancient
ancient says:

nice work gud luck

(5 years and 3582 days ago)

From Another World
avatar Drivenslush

BIRD POOP INVADERS!!!... wowzers author...awesome job..(now call Superman LOL)

(super to see you back sir

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

From Another World
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

Congrats on your placement.

(5 years and 3593 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar oana
oana says:

congrats BJ

(5 years and 3593 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar chakra1985

Congrats!!

(5 years and 3593 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar Lelaina
Lelaina says:

Congrats for your third place, Bjaockx!

(5 years and 3594 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar PSA2009
PSA2009 says:

Awesome image

(5 years and 3597 days ago)

Scales
avatar Govindrathod

Concept and idea are pretty creative but work still needs improvement......

(5 years and 3597 days ago)

Scales
avatar Govindrathod

Good one....

(5 years and 3597 days ago)

Dancer
avatar Govindrathod

The blend is beautiful.....and the work is awesome....good luck....

(5 years and 3597 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, I was referring to the lost detail on the white areas of the dancer.

(5 years and 3598 days ago)

Dancer
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Texture segments don't match well, but it's an interesting idea...

(5 years and 3598 days ago)

Scales
avatar loopyluv
loopyluv says:

Good idea...

(5 years and 3598 days ago)

Scales
avatar Jellopudding

ya I just don't like the graininess of it.. it sort of meshes the picture into the background... idk it is just my opinion..I do like the concept though

(5 years and 3599 days ago)

Scales
avatar youri2323
youri2323 says:

cool

(5 years and 3599 days ago)

Scales
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bmoore10 says:

nice idea..and very pretty

(5 years and 3599 days ago)

Sequinfalls
avatar Jellopudding

The picture quality of this seems not so great.... But I like the idea ..it is really neat, good job

(5 years and 3599 days ago)

Scales
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

That's exactly what I was referring to. Much better!!! The ONLY other nitpick I have that I didn't notice until now is see how there's repetitive sequins on the left? Probably where you connected the source to make it into a wall? (see the 8 dark sequins that look like they're in a pattern?) I would try and blend those a little better. It would look more natural that way. The corner looks good though. You should do well. GL!

(5 years and 3600 days ago)

Dancer
avatar loopyluv
loopyluv says:

Nice...

(5 years and 3601 days ago)

Dancer
avatar jawshoewhah
jawshoewhah [banned] says:

You've got a corner that seems to just disappear behind her arm, rather than being a visible edge. Do you see what I mean? I'll hold my vote.

(5 years and 3601 days ago)

Dancer
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

White areas are pretty blown out compared to the source pic, but not bad...

(5 years and 3601 days ago)

Dancer