1492 comments given:
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Weren't you drooling all over your wacom while drawing this? :P

(5 years and 3207 days ago)

Candy world
avatar greymval
greymval says:

In case it's not obvious, author is Poltergeist,... the whole series.

(5 years and 3207 days ago)

Ghosts in my Room
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greymval says:

Hypnotic eyes.

(5 years and 3207 days ago)

Night Lady
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Awesome expression !!! ...and teeth!

(5 years and 3207 days ago)

SAW 4D - Coming soon
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It has great colors, too.

(5 years and 3207 days ago)

long gone
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It looks beautiful.

(5 years and 3209 days ago)

Mysterious night...
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Well, Josh, that was a nice compliment to the author's son, making him a stud.

(5 years and 3210 days ago)

latin lover
avatar greymval
greymval says:

In her tutorial, madalina had some compositional tricks that she did not explain:

- those branches, create some sort of dynamic frame;
-the moon covered by the wing is the first checkpoint- it's not random that you find it in the lower 3rd of the image.
-pigeon has orange, to make a chromatic contrast, etc,etc.

The right half of your image is unatractive- compositionaly speaking, therefor i think that if you would crop it in half and keep only the left side, i would look so much cool.
Rotate that lightning strike 45 degrees.
You could also add a bit of orange on the pigeon.

Try it, and if it doesn't look better, never listen to me again

(5 years and 3210 days ago)

Mysterious night...
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Well it's not entirely your fault, cause the author of the tutorial had some problems with the perspective. That entrace should follow the horizontal lines between the bricks, instead the entire opening in the original is ambiguous, in reality it would make no sense.
However you should be more carefull at step 6, the second part, where it said that the gaps should match., and the stairs should be from wall to wall.

If you have probs. with proportions, use the final result of the tut., and draw some guide lines over it. Use them to build your entry on top.

(5 years and 3210 days ago)

Sarchophagus.
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Beautiful shot.

(5 years and 3211 days ago)

Brodie Castle
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greymval says:

A nice blend, texture is well used.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Ancient
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greymval says:

Reflections of this kind are a pain, we tend to avoid them so I won't judge you for trying. However you should at least mask the reflection on the window's frames ( those black lines).

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Cat and window
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greymval says:

It does look way better than the original.

People are not hate-commenting on your entries, they see your potential and want you to show them more, because it seems you have the skills to do it.

This is the reason why some "ridiculous entries" don't get criticized, cause the commenters don't know what to expect or ask from the author, and explaining him how to improve & grasp. fundamentals, might take too long.

People here also vote on creativity, imagination wow-effect, and by force of habit they expect more complex work.

Your entry looks gorgeous, as i said .If, for example, you would make it a portrait in a hands of a girl you would find as stock, voters could also appreciate your blending skills, your composition, your patience to search & find the right source & stuff like that.

I'm Not trying to tell you what to do, or make you modify anything, I'm just explaining how things work around, in my opinion.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

simple enhancement
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greymval says:

You've done a great work man. Congrats for your win.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Morning Waterfall
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greymval says:

Awesome work marina, well done.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Enchanted forest
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greymval says:

You could make a more complex UFO out of that lamp and disperse them, so that they won't stay grouped. You can also tilt some of them to make them look like they are coming from all directions.This would mprove the mood of the composition.

Maybe you can take another photo of the bus, this time with a neutral background, cause right now you would have to clone out all that writing.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Grinding Skeptics Into Soil
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Great shot! I think you're alowed to use perspective crop to straighten it in the right side.

(5 years and 3212 days ago)

Sunlit Art
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greymval says:

A. Doesn't matter who influenced you, because anyone was influenced at some point by something/someone; and it's not like someone is God or Nature itself and all the others just copy.
B. The problems with your entry:
1. No need for 2 animals: your selling point is the rhino and his head - that should stand up more, make the mushroom bigger- CROP the image, etc.
2. You already have 2 humans of different sizes and at the same distance from the eye - I believe you scaled one of them wrong.
Remove the one on top , keep only the one on the bottom, she will give you scale and interest point..
3. For realism sake the river should fall from the animals back, and be seen falling on the sand.

(5 years and 3213 days ago)

HD
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Who's a bumple???

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Abominable!
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Lol, a beautiful (shot, turned into a) disaster
That tree branch in low-left bumped in you pic first.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Hey Whatchadoin?
avatar greymval
greymval says:

If this is trully your diary cover, it's damn nice.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Leather Bound
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greymval says:

Scary!

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Who is next?
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Unique!

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

squashed raw egg
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greymval says:

Good shot.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Press
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I like this one, made only with blue & B/W.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Blue Silhouette
avatar greymval
greymval says:

This looks good, but i have no idea what it is.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Kinetic Colors
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Beautiful colors & comp. It fits well.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Sunset Spray
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Driven is right this is some good work.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Whoosh!
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Great cloning skills !

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Barricade???? What barricade?
avatar greymval
greymval says:

A decent entry.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Px Coins :)
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Great idea, fan-like money would have made a nice composition too.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Limited edition
avatar greymval
greymval says:

LOL

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

my best friend
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Awesome work, i love it.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Egg Lines
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greymval says:

LMAO! CMYK was right Nice shot anyways.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Patience
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Very well done, looks like pottery.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

eggs anyone
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Great pic!

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Othello
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Wow! Someone robbed the toy-store.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

take your pick
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Awesome shot.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

checkers
avatar greymval
greymval says:

In my country we call it: " Don't be mad, brother"

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Mirror image of SORRY!!
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Really good.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

checkmate
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Nice mood.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Catching The Wind
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greymval says:

Kyricom's right- sadness would go away imediatly!

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

sadnesss
avatar greymval
greymval says:

This is it! Totally on theme.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Recycled Giant
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It is a good work.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

SUBWAY
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greymval says:

This is pretty cool, but it could be better. For ex. you don't need the dustbin in this context.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Flooded City
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greymval says:

I think you meant "Fragrance" .

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Fragerance of true LOVE
avatar greymval
greymval says:

A beautiful shot.

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Leaving Tide
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greymval says:

I like it - floating wheel. Where do you live ?

(5 years and 3214 days ago)

Fool
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greymval says:

Wow, really impressive story, if you have more pics with the jelly, maybe you could suggest it as source. I don't know, it just looks amazing . If the company ever manages to produce again and make it popular, they could be the new Faberge eggs.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Jelly Awaiting its Turn WEEEEE
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Funny & hot entry author. Well executed.
@ Driven : sécheresse cutanée!! LOL
On va prier pour qu'il mouille, alors :P

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Secheresse