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greymval says:

Author, the guys ment to paint the shadows & highlights on your objects. Make a new layer o ntop of your object, make it a clipping mask set a lower oppacity, and paint with a soft brush using black & white so that it looks 3d, like this pin and this ball. Make sure the light on all objects comes from the same direction.

http://www.elite-view.com/art/Sports_Athletics/Bowling/564222~Bowling-Pin-Posters.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_iDA6dwYSASo/TScwKGvIAeI/AAAAAAAABC8/mjzSWcEk2hs/s1600/2.%2Bsphere.jpg
Also reflection of the right side pin is a bit wrong, but easy to fix.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Its a strike
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greymval says:

In symbolism the realism is secondary, cause otherwise it would interfere with the message.
The Fire is a burning desire, which doesn't affect the Wings of hope, but lack of patience makes your skin itchy and like you're crumbling inside, while the Fruit- object of desire is well rooted in your mind. No head = loosing it for something you want.
Someday you gotta tell us where you get all this inspiration, I can't come up with stuff like this unless I've really in love.
@ jade: "a dark surreal laced with defeat" would mean giving up on dreams/desires, an attitude I don't recommend -that would be loosing Patience .

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Patience
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greymval says:

Author please explain your second personal photo, that's one of the coolest things I've seen this year. What is it ?

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Jelly Awaiting its Turn WEEEEE
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greymval says:

First of all congrats on a realistic image.
1. I realize that you're not a smoker so good for you
2.Every cigarette has lines on the paper so that it would burn uniformous - those lines are actually where the paper is thinner.
Check this: http://static2.bigstockphoto.com/thumbs/1/3/2/large2/231722.jpg or any google image.
3.Flame can have any size but it will have a continuous shape, even if the wind blows, it will just bend without loosing it's integrity. In that position you would burn your thumb
http://www.g-peopleland.com/Lighter%20Flame.jpg
4.There are lighters that don't need the button pressed to light up, but that is not one of them.
Anyways, it's one of the best renders around. You can still improve it, or use this info for another contest.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Need a light?
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greymval says:

Mask could use more depht & texture, plus some sort of context to make it interesting- wooden floor, hanged on a wall, etc.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Double Mask
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greymval says:

There a rule in CG: never show the horizon, always cover it with stuff. Or you could choose an angle that shows more of the boat=selling piece & your strenght vs bavkground= fill in context which is secondary.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

A FERRY AT NIGHT
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greymval says:

This looks good, I would comment on the light & it's brightness, but that's your personal choice.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Beacon at Moon Set Point
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greymval says:

The window looks good as well but they didn't preserve all the colors- or maybe is a light effect.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Landscape window
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greymval says:

This is pure talent! Did you make it up from your imagination?

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

autumn afternoon
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greymval says:

Here's a tip for masking out the grass. Go to Select - Color range, then pick the color between those grass leaves adjust fuzinness and check in the preview what will be selected( the white part), click ok. Then either click delete or press the mask button and Ctrl +I the mask(inverts it).

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Peacock
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greymval says:

Not me, cause that guy you all 3 think about, never hopes we like it, he Knows we will
He would also provide a hi-res.
Watching this entry again I can see that the focus is on the back of the card in the left hand, I guess it's almost impossible to place it on the Ace of diamonds, since you don't know where it will be in the air.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Slow motion cheat
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greymval says:

Now this is coll, the fire looks solid and folowing a pattern of shapes.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Ring of Fire
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greymval says:

I believe it fits perfectly in the square theme.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Candle
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greymval says:

I agree, and I like the monochromatic feel.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

In To The Blue
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greymval says:

I won't say great job a third time(lol), but it's a nice composition. At first glance i thought they were turists, what were they protesting for?

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

United We Stand
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greymval says:

Great shot here.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Remembered
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greymval says:

i would have loved a focus on the bug, since it's a beautiful specimen.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Peek-A-Boo
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greymval says:

One of the best around. Good job.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

painting by numbers
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greymval says:

Some craquleque filter with, displacement or warp would creep this more

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Dialing in the Cow
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greymval says:

Trololol.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Abominable!
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greymval says:

Reptiles getting it on Are these actually 2 toys that you've placed together?

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

True Love
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greymval says:

I wish it was more focused too, it's a beautiful sculpture.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Drago
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greymval says:

Totally agree with Jean + impressive colors & quality.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

The strength
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greymval says:

Without question!

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

old lighthouse
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greymval says:

I find this artistique, cause of the Square format in which you see other rectangular patterns of different proportions and all having a relation with the other elements around. There was an artist using mate colors and this principle- his name escapes me know.
D'apres moi this shot makes sense beyond the urban decay theme, because of what i previously stated and it would make sense even if it was an abstract drawing.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Old Wiring
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greymval says:

Escher!

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

sphere
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greymval says:

The first cat shot i trully like on this site .

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Hunting
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greymval says:

Well cropped.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Door
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greymval says:

This is so good ! You used a camera filter to get this type of light, right?

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

WalkWay
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greymval says:

This could be a nice pattern.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

A Bundle
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greymval says:

I'm ussually not a fan of roses but i like this POV.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Rosey Red
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greymval says:

May he be safe.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

PRAY
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greymval says:

Beautiful, it should have more views.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Tropic
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greymval says:

Looks good indeed. I would like it to write "red" on the paper or even better "green"- like a mindgame.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Red pencil
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greymval says:

Great work! Great eye(s) too

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Hungry?
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greymval says:

Use saturation in photoshop (Ctrl+U) to make it red not orange.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

old lighthouse
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greymval says:

If this is not awesome, I don't know what is.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Interior
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greymval says:

Well done.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Cutting Red
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greymval says:

This is a nice entry, it kind & could look like an abstract painting.

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Scarlet
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greymval says:

I like it! The floating cards look good, and it's not off topic IMO, unless your original was BW and you overcolored the red. In that case don't tell anyone .

(5 years and 3215 days ago)

Slow motion cheat
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greymval says:

This is a famous chair, Eames from Herman Miller. great modeling & render!

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Lounge and Ottoman
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greymval says:

Awesome work author, the animation vid. was fun too.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Attractive Spheres
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greymval says:

I can see all the details on the sides.
Mossy IT'S YOUR SCREEN!!!
I'm 100% sure that it's either your screen or your eyes, I'm sorry. Please change & check these.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Station No. 3  Blue Line
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greymval says:

This is just too awesome, i would 100% it.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Tea for relax
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greymval says:

Coffee helps only if you drink it first

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Coffee only helps so much
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greymval says:

Narcissistic joy

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

It
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greymval says:

Awesome pic, what's her number ? j/k

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Vegas Joy
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greymval says:

This one looks like a modern painting.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Vivid Visuals
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greymval says:

Looks very sci-fi.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Silicone balls
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greymval says:

It's looking good but you could have used the source more. You already have concrete in the foreground of the source; the cabins could be transformed into wagons, stuff like that. Good work anyways.

(5 years and 3219 days ago)

Station No. 3  Blue Line