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avatar greymval
greymval says:

I read somewhere that this kind of events happened and inspired the inventor of Photochop('em balls).

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

bad monkey angle
avatar greymval
greymval says:

That's 2 senses less: she can't feel pain either.

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

What? I can
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Lol! you should update with her reaction!

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

Hunt and PXL
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Damn this is audacious!
I'm not a fan of those edgy banana crust of the male part, but you could add one more in back so that it looks 3D. And you could blur some edges of the banana.
Oh, and d'apres moi, those female/male symbols would look better if bigger, differrent colors & without the chain.

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

Woman&Man
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greymval says:

Reflection for object above the water is more difficult, tricky is a better word, than those near the water. You'll have to be carefull when calculating it. Good luck.

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

In the Dream
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greymval says:

nice colors!

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

chocolate
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greymval says:

Gold & black always look good.

(5 years and 3295 days ago)

Quality
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I'm scrolling up and down the pic and I think i can hypnotize myself

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Christmas sky
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greymval says:

Le Casino? Mais oui, Le Casino!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Christmas in Montecarlo
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greymval says:

Uhm, nope the brick floor doesn't mean it's outside, and the sun can come down through a glass roof, like malls have.
BUT... if you have ( or can take ) a larger shot which includes a street or the sky and add it in SBS, that would clear doubts.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

White Tree
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greymval says:

Funny. Looks like Bart could use a proctologist.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Look For Bart
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greymval says:

So many tasty colours

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Winder Christmas
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greymval says:

You can place a larger photo of the environnement in the SBS, to eliminate any doubts.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

ho ho ho
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greymval says:

I don't wanna rain on friiskiwi's parade here, but that looks like the Romanian flag

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Antibes & Christmas lights
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greymval says:

Unique!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Candy Cane Tree
avatar greymval
greymval says:

First of all author, you should be proud for giving yourself a prety hard mission for a beginner.
Although not perfect, i consider this an improvement and I hope the voters will appreciate your efforts & patience. Be sure I do.
The most critical adjustments that i consider you should do at this stage:
1.Make those edges clean! Light pole,umbrella man, left side forest & left side building need adjustments.
Check this tutorial here and use Pen tool to repair them :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AGVsn-X2GxI
2. When you put the light at a window near the edge of the building you must put light on the side of the building as well, it's logical. Rooms on corners are usually square, and have windows on two sides so when the light is up it should be seen on both sides.
Keep it up, you're doing good.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

The Institution
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greymval says:

...and it's a great pick-up technique as well, lol.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Solo
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greymval says:

Another background or bg colour would make this stand out, i think.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Drops
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greymval says:

That's a b*tc# slap to Gravity!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Drop Alone
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greymval says:

It's perfectly round, how come? For some reason I think this required some (serious) effort.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

BW Drop
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greymval says:

Almost looks like a transparent coffee bean.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Green Droplet
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greymval says:

Some description of how did you do this, and a Hi-res would help appreciating your work better.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Ice cold
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greymval says:

Wow, this is exquisite.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Pinstripe
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greymval says:

The condensation on the inside makes these drops really interesting-(big and small concave texture,oh yeah!), but those numbers take away from the effect.
Could you do a close up so that we don't see them numbers and upload a high-res? That would be wonderfull.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Vapour
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greymval says:

Sensual!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Red Rose
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greymval says:

Yup, texture & color, make it marvelous.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Drops
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greymval says:

Just don't use saliva to seal the letter!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

The Ransom Letter
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greymval says:

This is simple, yet looks so good!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

pencil PXL
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greymval says:

Reminds me of SAW.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Industrial
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greymval says:

This looks so good, lights/contrast & ambient.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Boggle
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Yup, crop image in Photoshop and right after your Crop selection check the perspective box on the top bar and then adjust your selction so that when you press Enter your Image would look normal not lYou could also use Free transform to adjust.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Gang boss fight
avatar greymval
greymval says:

BUT... if you place that chair on top of the hill, in the bakcground, and just distort it a bit to blend your style, the source will be recognizable, and this would be a cool entry,imo. Don't forget to add it a (loong) shadow.

About colours.. you could do some blue highlights here and there, but it's your choice.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Where the magic happens
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greymval says:

Creepy, but funny as hell

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Mixxy`s Amazement
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Just commenting from an architect point of view:
the counter-step ( for those type of stairs) is ussually 15-17cm which would be a bit more than Half of the man's Head. You could scale the guy to fix this.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

alone  . . . .
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I agree, flipping it would make the lighting issue easier to correct.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

stormy sea
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greymval says:

OK, if curves/ transparancy didn't help, you should make some layers with the environnment colour and clip to your girl& umbrella( which should be desaturated a bit), overlay those and lower oppacity below 20%.
Be aware not to make her look dead , but to have the aspect that she is really in that cave, not in a studio with a background.
Light reflects on surfaces and gives them colour, but surfaces also reflect their color on other objects, influencing their hue - that's the motto of blending, lol.
PS: you could try to place some fog, not too much, if you think it helps the composition- you can find many tutorials about fog online.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Afloat
avatar greymval
greymval says:

LOL, i don't know what else to say...
Adjust curves, maybe?

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Nana Puddin
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greymval says:

Yeah, cigare would be cool IMO, you could try it, if you can make it realistic.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Second Thoughts
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greymval says:

Use the Pen tool, author, to make those shapes/edges look better, you can stroke with eraser, afterwards blur them a bit. It's not a bad idea, honestly.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

banananamobile
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Well you got the idea author, but you could make those lights yellow, and placed randomly, not just on the top windows. Also add a glow to them , double click on layer = layer style, click outer glow, adjust setting in that pannel.
Same thing for the light pole + you might have to make a new layer on top and use a yellow brush to drag light lines from the lamp and then make them transparent, screen or overlay and blur.
I strongly suggest to search some tutorials out there, in case my explanations are not helpfull enough.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

The Institution
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Yup, in China the bride is always in red, but some nice "lingerie", can be made from this too .
Placing it on a model ( find on deviant stock or here in Pictures-Uploads - stock) and warping it would make this awesome.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Wedding Dress
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greymval says:

Try to fix it and update your entry author: My stuff, My Contest Entries - Edit. Good luck.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

block
avatar greymval
greymval says:

And I love the mood,(lol) and those details on the lamp.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Light show
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Really nice shot.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

A Universal Direction
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Original !

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Ouch my back...
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greymval says:

Nice landscape, where is this?

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

sigh to East
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greymval says:

I like the snowy aspect , and those cozy houses in the background.

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

Findhorn Village
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greymval says:

Oh, that he's blind and walking towards a broken bridge. Well you could put a bandage on his eyes ( around his head) to make it more obvious.

(5 years and 3297 days ago)

Sense Less
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greymval says:


Good luck Tacky, man !!

(5 years and 3297 days ago)

Gang boss fight
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greymval says:

More light on her dress would do good and somekind of distort ( either liquify, displacement or spherize) so it looks like it's on her.
If you wanna keep the nipples make them look like they are on purpose: place some vivid colour around them or dark lines from it like a sun, or something like this: http://shrani.si/files/rozeta10wq4.jpg
And there goes the 3rd comment about nipples, lol.

(5 years and 3297 days ago)

Fashion