1492 comments given:
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Wha..what? She was snowboarding and something horrible happened. It.s grotesque enought!

(5 years and 3322 days ago)

Grotesque
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greymval says:

You need to work on the eyelashes, check your neighbours' work, there's plenty of inspiration around .

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Pretty eye
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greymval says:

Cute & funny .

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

The Sacred Bird
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greymval says:

Repeating an element lowers it's value. Either take out the background statues or change their colour, or change tha statues themselves.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Keeper
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greymval says:

Great job man, now it's a kick-a$$ entry.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Sea Surprise
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greymval says:

There are lots of bricks pattern out there. Search on imageafter.com for example - cause now it looks a bit fake.
Also give depht to the window, so that it won t look like paper.
Here's an awesome tutorial about making a stone wall - use it to make your bricks real, before time runs out. http://www.lunacore.com/photoshop/tutorials/tut028.htm
Best of luck!

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Jail House Squirrel
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Well i won't lie, it's not perfect, but the overall image has improved from the first time i saw it.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

By The Old Shed
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I think it's cool, good blend.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Neighborhood Bully!
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greymval says:

I know the giraffe's neck was short, but don't stretch it cause the spots look weird. Either copy paste and blend a part of the neck to continue either make a blend between the mantis neck and the giraffe.
You'll have to blend the fore members too.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

prying girafmantos
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greymval says:

Use soft brush eraser for the edges on the nuke (maybe some blur too) and lower opacity a bit for better blend. The colors look good.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

nuke proofing
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It looks good author

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

You jump to me, or me to you?
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greymval says:

Thanks author, that's helpful indeed.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Perfection
avatar greymval
greymval says:

i think it's awesome.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

The End Of Music
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greymval says:

I like it too. Good title as well.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Residual Delusions
avatar greymval
greymval says:

This one is good, great sources you found there. Naughty tree!

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

The tree
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Nice one.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Everything comes to an End
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greymval says:

Did you try to make that motion blur, like it's taking off? Back then, when they were making photos looking like this 18-19 hundreds you had to stay still for half an hour or so

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Last Of The Breed
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greymval says:

Did you try to place the kid a bit to the left and rotate his head so that he looks at the monster's head and not like ignoring him? I know it's not easy but it would have a great effect.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Experimentations Of The Loch
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greymval says:

Nice entry. Here are my tips:
1.The creature should have a blue-ish overlay in order to look like it's in water, i would even lower the opacity to 90-95.
2. the lower part of the mouth doesn't look 3d (perspective is off). try to add the other layer of teeth behind and something like a tongue between them.
3. The are 2 types of bubbles : soap ones & water ones. You need the second type that looks like this:
http://www.pixshock.net/pic_b/31f006131aa76bed5f1dec01cc6d4203.jpg
You see,they are not round, cause water is heavy and makes them squashed. I think you can fix this from jitter.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Sea Surprise
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Dude, it's a good entry, don't get discouraged, we've all seen a hell lot worse. People here are just trying to help u improve, it would be more unpleasant not to have any feedback.

(5 years and 3323 days ago)

Putting my foot down!
avatar greymval
greymval says:

What, what? It looks better WITHOUT shadows?
The thing is there's an obvious shadow on the shed so..
Well at least you could try to burn under horsey or smth, but you know how to do a shadow, so place it under him.

If you could place those fern on top of the shed-layer by using masks, it would already look better. GL

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

By The Old Shed
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Good blend.

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Flamantis Scorpious
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greymval says:

Flawless IMO !

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Over the hills
avatar greymval
greymval says:

This is too cool.

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Crying
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It all has been said

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Depth
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greymval says:

I like the way you made the skin texture ( too bad u didn't quite use it). My fist thought was that this is an actual photo ( maybe a bit manipulated) so i had to check the SBS.
This is photorealistic, d'apres moi.

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Eye
avatar greymval
greymval says:

LOL, good one!

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Yes? Can I Help You?
avatar greymval
greymval says:

There could be improvement, like some tear forming in the eye as well, taking care of the shadows/ highlights of the tear so that i won't seem solid and consistent, but fading away.. like this: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_DN7lOKPVYQQ/ST2rVdwcfbI/AAAAAAAAAWA/w6NpLcLxSMY/s400/Tear.jpg
Nice effort, anyways.

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Eye
avatar greymval
greymval says:

They said : The more photo-realistic, the better, but this is good it's more close to drawing art than photo-like drawings. I like it!

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

 Beautiful Eye
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greymval says:

Awesome, makes me weepy.

(5 years and 3324 days ago)

Innocence
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greymval says:

Is that Megan Fox? And no, I'm not obsessed!!
You could add a few words in the SBS on how you do it ( for newbies like me), smudge, or soft eraser with blur on shadows - stuff like that.

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

Perfection
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I allways thought that pulling the plug was related to medical terms - like shutting down life support.
Nice how easy reflections are, in Max.

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

Pulling the Plug
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greymval says:

What's the thing with aurum, can you do an explanation for ignorants like me? I googled it but i still don't get the entry. I even searched it in urban dictionary ! )

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

Aurum
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Nice composition, looks like a logo.

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

At Sea Level
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greymval says:

The tail of forks is ussually curved ( just google fork on Images- you ll see) , it's some universal ergonomical rule for designing forks ( and spoons).
Besides this minor detail, i think it's a good entry for Idioms.

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

A Taste Of Your Own Medicine
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greymval says:

Not necessary the box needs to be taken care of, but the overral ambient. You could use some shadow on the ground and maybe a different ( warmer ) colour for the background.

The stomach has more light in the lower side and it's darker in the upper part, and by choosing a fade background that also has light in the lower part, it nullifies the contrast.

MO: use some orange dark clouds as background and make a foreground on which the box stands. You could use that trick with clouds and lighning effects for a BG textures. Keep it up!

(5 years and 3325 days ago)

Cast Iron Stomach Award
avatar greymval
greymval says:

Not bad !

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Playground of the mind
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greymval says:

Don't take this wrong, but it's kind of like a "plain filter entry". Since there's no (more) rule about posting filter entries, i guess you can do that, but make it more interesting.
You could: use different tonalities of blue, like a mosaique; make a blue dust cloud that swallows the image, make a floating in the sky shack, etc. Make it cooler.

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Lonely Blue Shack
avatar greymval
greymval says:

I like how you assembled the picture from parts of the original, it's an impressive work. The thing is that the colourfull sky creates a too strong of an entity that puts the foreground on second place, therefore nomatter how many details you place on the eagle and the carcase, the prime colours (sky) that take 40% of the picture will make those fade away,

You could either make the sky only 10-20% of the pic, or making the eagle and skeleton overlaping it, or.. using the sky in the original pic: the grey purple one.

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

Close To Death
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greymval says:

Impressive work! Almost took it for a picture.

(5 years and 3645 days ago)

Practice Makes Perfect.
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greymval says:

I ran out of space in the first comment.. Nice exploration path you took there, betting on the contrast. It's simple but it's probably the best from this contest.

(5 years and 3645 days ago)

Urban life
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greymval says:

A little add on wazowski's comment: enlarge the ripple effect for more impact. Duplicate the layer with the ripple, Ctrl shift U to desaturate it, and add more contrast. Turn off the other layer, and save this as a psd file, different from your entry (it will be your displacement map).After that you can delete this layer. Select the reflection layer, go filters-Distort-Displace and choose the file you previously saved, Afterthat overlay or play with opacity. Do the same with the shadow. If it works it should look really cool, if not, check some tutorials for Displacement.

(5 years and 3645 days ago)

Urban life
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greymval says:

roflmao, this entry was underated, you should have had a Humor vote bar, you wouldhave gained more points. Anyway this was the funniest.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Too much gravity!
avatar greymval
greymval says:

good idea, this invention would totally change exam results, lol.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Protect My Files...
avatar greymval
greymval says:

nice background.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Peace Offering
avatar greymval
greymval says:

lol, it's funny.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Priceless
avatar greymval
greymval says:

wow, wow like in: my eyes hurt!! It's a great effect, would have liked to see an SBS on how to do that.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Op Coin
avatar greymval
greymval says:

It looks like a filter work only, nest time try to be more creative.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Artistic shape
avatar greymval
greymval says:

There should be tutorials on the net to help you make realistic fire or maybe if you can find some fire source- pics to blend in. I think it would look bette without no light in the main building but more on the left one. The fire-crew is well blended.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

inferno
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greymval says:

This looks pretty cool. I belive the plants should be a little darker and have a shadow cast on the walls, and theyshould have a continuity, instead of a random grow.

(5 years and 3713 days ago)

Apocalyptic Gaudi