the water looks horrible and you didnt get an ice effect! the ice looks horrible! i think you should go for a totally different idea! if you do that its gonna be like a fresh start and i know tha you, author are capable of making a good image!

I love people who try and submit to expand their skills. although you may not have totally achieved your goal. well done.. explore tutorials , a good way to develop your skills.. i struggle with matching skills with ideas.

I don't think you achieved an ice effect, the images look very pixelated.. i'd take this image to another direction and add snow instead, maybe a different sky that complements what's happening. Good luck.