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karaflazz says:

This is a great idea author but it lacks of presentation.
I think that if you spent a little more time with the composition (setting it up / frame it / lighting) this would be a very good entry.
No offence author!
As i said it's a great idea!!!

(5 years and 3296 days ago)

the oldest phone
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karaflazz says:

Is this a Western Electric Company phone author?
At the bottom of the phone,on the ringer knob has an arrow with the indication " < LOUD > "?
If so...we have the same phone even if we are half the world around!!!

(5 years and 3298 days ago)

Masterpiece Theater
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karaflazz says:

Nice warm colors!

(5 years and 3298 days ago)

Masterpiece Theater
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karaflazz says:

Great DOF.
Love the leading line on the left.
Very good eye author!

(5 years and 3298 days ago)

rust n
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karaflazz says:

A phone book would be more suitable (for the composition IMHO).
You would fill the empty space behind the phone with an item that fits more with your composition,but that doesn't mean that this composition is bad!
Good job author!

(5 years and 3298 days ago)

creamy curves
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karaflazz says:

Nice DOF.
Did you place the clock on the b/g for a reason or just to "fill" the "blank" of the frame?

(5 years and 3299 days ago)

creamy curves
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(5 years and 3301 days ago)

Lightbulbs in the Sand
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karaflazz says:

Since you came up with this idea (witch is a good one) you should try a little bit more to impress the feeling/mood of a praying girl to God IMHO.
The model"looks" like it's sleeping.
You could use light/shadows (with a flash) to give us the feeling of faith/hope!
This is too flat for my taste.
A nice try no matter what.

(5 years and 3312 days ago)

Faith
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(5 years and 3324 days ago)

colorfull
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karaflazz says:

Fair enough author...Good luck!!!!

(5 years and 3336 days ago)

mixer
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karaflazz says:

A tighter crop (the knobs only) would be better IMHO.
It would create a colorful repetitive pattern!

(5 years and 3336 days ago)

mixer
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karaflazz says:

R E S P E C T



(5 years and 3359 days ago)

In A Photographer
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karaflazz says:

Back ground (b/g) is whats behind the main subject on your photo!

(5 years and 3377 days ago)

Tropicana
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karaflazz says:

IMHO the label/brand of the product should be in the main focus on a ad photo.
Colors are great (purple is a little BOH) models pose it very good but i can't see the name DIOR any where...
If i was about to buy this sunglasses i would like to know/see what the brand is.
Of course this is my opinion after all.
GL

(5 years and 3377 days ago)

Sunglasses (Dior)
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karaflazz says:

A wider frame would be better in this case author.
The b/g is a good choice but the whole composition should be in frame!!!

(5 years and 3377 days ago)

Tropicana
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karaflazz says:

Put a cigar in to the gun maybe?
This would all so be GREAT in b&w with out the key light (the light in front that lights the lady).
Using only the fill light would create a beautiful silhouette of the lady & gun in a totally black background(mind the light on her face & hands).
Still a nice composition...

(5 years and 3381 days ago)

He
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karaflazz says:

The look on her eyes is very funny.
It screams....i am boring!

(5 years and 3385 days ago)

Pooped Pup
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karaflazz says:

It's a shame that such a beautiful photo has :
empty windows_4c55da76400d4
as a title!!!!
Nice mood.

(5 years and 3385 days ago)

empty windows_4c55da76400d4
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karaflazz says:

Since this is a set up you could include the lower part of the cups dish (just a little wider frame on the bottom).
I like the table lines,they add depth!

(5 years and 3386 days ago)

Tea party
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karaflazz says:

I like the cinematic frame & the white leading line on the road.
Very nice use of rule of thirds!

(5 years and 3386 days ago)

A stroll in Wales
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karaflazz says:

Artistic...

(5 years and 3387 days ago)

The Embrace
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karaflazz says:

A dead dolphin?

(5 years and 3389 days ago)

What Why How
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(5 years and 3389 days ago)

metro tunnel
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karaflazz says:

Open PS.
Go to "Image / image rotation / Arbitrary / & set the angle value.Try it & you will see it's quite easy!

(5 years and 3405 days ago)

Lonely Water
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karaflazz says:

Very good entry.
Reminds me a scene from "star wars the empire strikes back" where the aircrafts where fighting in the tunnels of "Dark star".
Light helped a lot!!!

(5 years and 3406 days ago)

Tire Tyre
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karaflazz says:

That makes sense author.
It just couldn't be noise!!!

(5 years and 3410 days ago)

cool clean water
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karaflazz says:

Is that think healthy???

(5 years and 3410 days ago)

Egg and Chips
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karaflazz says:

I keep coming on this one cause i can't figure out what is "that thing" that makes the back ground noisy but ONLY on the black part of it!The whole photo is hell sharp (the glass,the white foreground) but as the eye travels to the background (on the black part) there's something that "looks" like noise but it can't be!
Help author...put me out of my misery!

(5 years and 3410 days ago)

cool clean water
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karaflazz says:

Great D O F !

(5 years and 3410 days ago)

Poker
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karaflazz says:

Yeah....that's very...........V E R Y old man.
When i first saw this i didn't even knew how some one can do something like this...
I remember seen that on pxlshots November maybe December '08...if i am not wrong(please correct me if i am wrong)
Its very nice to have you & your photography back man!!!

wow....

(5 years and 3413 days ago)

red bike
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karaflazz says:

wow...wow...
Calm down boys

(5 years and 3414 days ago)

wassup doc?
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karaflazz says:

waahahahahahahaaaa....
Very funny author...
If you can't afford money for a tripod this is the best idea!!!

(5 years and 3416 days ago)

trashpod
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karaflazz says:

I all ready vote very high for this author so please if you be so kind re-shoot so the whole dice is in the frame....this is a fantastic photo!
Bravo!!!!

(5 years and 3416 days ago)

dice
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karaflazz says:

ade
Sad but true unfortunately

(5 years and 3417 days ago)

Bad Aim
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karaflazz says:

We humans are pigs....

(5 years and 3417 days ago)

Bad Aim
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karaflazz says:

You should place the mirror closer to the board so theres no "gap" between the squares.

(5 years and 3419 days ago)

Checkered Darkness
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karaflazz says:

Waahahahahahahhahaa
Very funny author...very smart!!!

(5 years and 3419 days ago)

Recycle Bin
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karaflazz says:

What lens do you use author?
I think that if the f number is very small (1.4 - 1.8 - 2.8 f.e) you get that effect.Happened to me a few times!
I am not sure about that...i think it has to do with the DOF.

(5 years and 3420 days ago)

Shapeshifter
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karaflazz says:

It's a square all right author!
But vignettes are not allowed.

(5 years and 3420 days ago)

Shapeshifter
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karaflazz says:

aaahahahahaa!!!!.Hello there wind.
Yes it's me in the beginning thats why i said is not THAT bad.

(5 years and 3420 days ago)

Present
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karaflazz says:

Great structure / clarity / colors!
Hi vote from me author!!!
From that angle i feel like i am hiding from something...that is the feeling that photo gave me!

(5 years and 3421 days ago)

My beautiful city
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karaflazz says:

One thing for sure is that her eyes are eye catching!!!
Cute little girl author.
She's got attitude

(5 years and 3421 days ago)

showtime
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karaflazz says:


cmon....
is not THAT bad!!!

(5 years and 3421 days ago)

Present
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karaflazz says:

The choice of the background is not very good (it's a towel)?

(5 years and 3422 days ago)

cheese-it(s)
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karaflazz says:

Aw...
You crop it too much my friend.
At least the car is gone!
GL.

(5 years and 3422 days ago)

I am all alone
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karaflazz says:

The background is a little "messy" but cute little girl & make-up author.
Great eyes!

(5 years and 3422 days ago)

My Kid
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karaflazz says:

Beautiful.
A whole different world down there!!!

(5 years and 3422 days ago)

Coral reef
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karaflazz says:


I agree with you my friend
Lets all calm down a bit!

(5 years and 3423 days ago)

This is how I learnt maths
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karaflazz says:

Actually no Locksmagic.
I download this photo & i increase contrast 2 in PS & the chips looks very good (because of their position the light source creates a "border" around them on the spot that chips&background meet,so increasing contrast does the job with out "loosing "the shape of the chips).As for the focus,we don't know what author shoots with so the photo might just be very "low" resolution.
The photo uses the rule of thirds pretty good imho.Placing it "dead center" it would be very "flat".
But then you might be right & i might be wrong.
Just speaking out my mind as everybody else!
Btw author i play poker too (on FB,not with real money)

(5 years and 3423 days ago)

This is how I learnt maths
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karaflazz says:

The right foot of the kid is not in the frame.
Flash is not the best choice here author.
The whole set up could be more "careful" ( with out the distracting things on the background).
If that was your best idea for this contest you should set this up a little more careful (imho).
Gl

(5 years and 3423 days ago)

I