Personally i would set this up differently.
A landscape frame with the warehouse filling it all (the car leaves the impression that she is not totally alone) & the couch with the model far away from the camera (not very far...just as far as it needs to show that she is kinda small/alone/helpless in all this emptiness).
All ways following the rule of thirds (placing the couch & the model in proper position).
I don't know if you have the equipment to take this shot on an other time of the day (external flash f e ),but it would add a lot to the feeling you want to impress.

I know you dive my friend so i am sure that his is a underwater capture!!!
Very nice!

I downloaded it to my desktop rotate it & there was a beautiful photo.
Nice work author!

I am waiting here to place my vote author.This looks good but i can't see it well!
Please rotate.

A different time of the day (sun set maybe would help to create a light/shadow game between the trees) & this would be fantastic.
Still good author!

On the right place at the right time author.
Beautiful!

A wider frame (that would include the whole girl) would be much better (imho).
All so lighting good be better (flash is hard).
You should focus the viewer on the girl (cutting the girls legs isn't a good choice).

& how do you know that kyricom
Are you a Genius or something...?

If you hide some kind of supernatural powers please say so cause i don't understand anything!!!

...but...is it safe????
I though of it some times but then i said....
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Theres no reason not to believe you author.
This is a great photo.
I wish you the best!

Fantastic mood & detail here!
What r you shooting with author?

You look really good with this outfit.
My only objection is that the pipe refers to a time before 30s-40s.
Like Sherlock Holmes or something(1800 f e).
Pipe is a very delicate kind of smoking unlike the cigar which was more like the smoking way at that time (30s-40s) among with the drink prohibition.
Over all this is a great composition author & i must say that i really like you in this outfit.
Adds style to you (imho).

Honestly author...Was this photo your BEST choice for this contest?
Sorry if i am wrong but this is actually a snap shot.
Theres no composition,no feeling,no mood in the shot!
The guy looks that is boring to death...
Once again sorry if i am wrong but lets try to raise up the quality of the entry's on this site.
Don't just search you HDD to find a photo that "fits" the contest.
If you don't can't / want to take a photo don't submit an entry that don't stand much of a chance!
All this is just my opinion author & i am sorry if i insulted you or your model in any way!!!

You should straighten the horizon...
Is a very important thing in photography!

Ahahahahahahahahaha
Yeah they would look nice with the "other" leather accessory i have!!!!!

The quality is not very good!
Lots of noise!

The wooden pole is "dead center".
Placing the subject in the dead center lacks dimension.
Maybe the pole could start from the left or right corner of your frame (diagonal) & make this a little more interesting.
Just an idea!

As i can imagine you used flash for this shot (the shadow behind the bottle).
You should shot in raw so after the shot you can adjust the white balance.
If your white balance was on "fluorescent" or " tungsten" you'll get that "blueish" kind of color on your photo (it's kinda blue on the right & left side of the bottle).
Any way shooting RAW is much better than JPEG (you can do a lot of things on your photo) imho!

A lower angle would make this even better (only the top part of the chairs would be visible with out any of the grass) & you would have a fantastic repetitive pattern (imho).

Sorry to say author but this photo is totally boh (blow out highlights).

...oops..

I did it again....

When i see such beautiful eyes something is getting over me

....i can help it...somebody S T O P meeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

Those eyes...

Great lighting.
Great look (off frame).
Great detail (in high resolution).
Great bronze skin tones.
This author is a masterpiece (the best photo you ever manage to take IMHO).
R E S P E C T ! ! !

Looks like the Star Wars: Episode V - The Empire Strikes Back.
Spooky!!!

Just finished drinking mine...
Hello there!

Nice looking off frame...
I like it!

Really fitting title here author.
This is far beyond different from your other self.

You got style...i'll give you that!!!

Ok...
You thought about it & you come up with this composition.
I know what you try to impress with this comparison if i got this right (that the phone is sooo old that belongs to the Jurassic age).

Nice idea but the whole composition doesn't help a lot (IMHO).

I think that mellanieb is totally right author.I checked my pxlshots favorites & there was you in that purple veil...

Of course no shoot compares with that one (26 comments,6 favorites).

Nice to see you again my friend

Wasuuuup!

Is it a bird....?
Is it a plane....?
It's super authoooooor!!!

The Shallow Depth of Field doesn't do good in this case(the pick of the nose is the only thing that is clear in this photo,all the other parts are blured in the background).
A biggest f number or an other angle would be better i think but it's still a great photo with great lighting!

cocor

There's experience in those eyes i think!
Nice to meet you.

Damn....
What is that B E A S T you are holding????
I thought you were a terrorist or something...

Nice to meet you author!!!

Did you try multi-segment light metering or just spot?
That calculates the luminance of different parts of the scene to determine the optimal exposure.
You know better author.

Nice composition.
It would be nice if the screen was turned on.
The phone is kinda lost in the berry's,but still a good composition!!!

You'r like a sculpture author...
What a posse!!!
Funniest posse ever.
My regards.

Why should we???

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Nice to see you author!

A couple of sec more (exposure) would made this even better(more car trails) but is very good as it is!!!

Like the reflections on the chrome (the numbers that fade away).

It's nice too see you author.

Can we get i high-resolution thats actually high enough...
What are you shooting with author?

I love my Nikon too....love...love...love...love....love it!!!!!!

Lots of history here author...
How in Gods name those artifacts came to your possession???
You are not that old like you find them on a beach or something...lol
Never saw that before in my life...
Really interesting!!!

....or you could place all of your cameras on a surface with the mirror against them & set the small camera on 10 sec timer so your hands are not visible in the photo.
Focus on glass is really hard...you are right!!!

The cups handles are a bit BOH.
I know that was a hard surface to work with (white,curved...a total challenge).
I don't know how to deal with that too.
A nice entry no matter what!

They would dance better with a wider frame that would include their legs...

Nice perspective...adds depth!