973 comments given:
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langstrum says:

I have some suggestions: (1) the clouds seem so noisy, maybe adding more grain on the dragon will normalize that. (2) the chains near the clouds were distorted too much, they looked flat. (3) the chain under the neck should be darker. These are all I can find. The other things are the same as the previous comments. Love your idea

(5 years and 3537 days ago)

I caught a dream last night
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langstrum says:

Your unique drawing style, very nice . Good luck

(5 years and 3537 days ago)

Green Eyes
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langstrum says:

Very nice illustration. The only thing I'm wondering is the "kitchen tools or accessories" are not obvious in the making of your character. Maybe you used them as the source images, but you should make their characteristics observable.

(5 years and 3538 days ago)

The Dragon Rider....!!
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langstrum says:

Very good I think if you add some shadows on the face and the bottom part of the baby dino, also change the shadow of the tail to the opposite side, you will have a perfect entry. Good luck

(5 years and 3538 days ago)

Mom...... Where are you...?
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langstrum says:

No more improvement is needed, you've got an excellent entry

(5 years and 3539 days ago)

Steampunk Girl
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langstrum says:

Congrats

(5 years and 3539 days ago)

Heart of a fly
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langstrum says:

Congrats

(5 years and 3539 days ago)

USS-13042010
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langstrum says:

Congrats

(5 years and 3539 days ago)

Nectar Dragon
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langstrum says:

well done

(5 years and 3540 days ago)

cap of tea!
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langstrum says:

Congrats, excellent entry with your humor factor , feel like the next snapshot after the entry of mqtrf

(5 years and 3540 days ago)

KNOCK IT OFF!
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langstrum says:

wow, it's your cat . I didn't vote on this contest so I didn't know that. Congratulations on your first success drawing ^^!!!

(5 years and 3540 days ago)

Mimi (updated)
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langstrum says:

congrats one more time

(5 years and 3540 days ago)

many pots in  the garden
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langstrum says:

Congrats very well done

(5 years and 3540 days ago)

Cute beast
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langstrum says:

Very nice and very interesting to see your new entry ^^. I just have a small suggestion of erasing the black strokes around some fishes, this can be seen clearly in the HiRes. Best of luck to you

(5 years and 3541 days ago)

Underwater Life
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langstrum says:

Agree with sunzet, only P is enough for a nice entry

(5 years and 3541 days ago)

PIX
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langstrum says:

'Pxls don't lie' is better

(5 years and 3541 days ago)

my pxleyes
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langstrum says:

What a pity that you can't edit it anymore. The wave needs more works (it's darker but in the top of the splash, it's always brighter ). Anyhow, it's better, stronger than the first one

(5 years and 3541 days ago)

Stop, Please!
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langstrum says:

The repetition is quite obvious

(5 years and 3542 days ago)

sicily street
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langstrum says:

The water area in front of the ship should be a bit darker (because of the ship) and the waves should be stronger (by looking at the debris, I can imagine how fast and strong the collision is). Also, these debris seems to be big (I feel like the houses are made of ... wood or they are going to be collapsed before the collision). What I like the most is the water splash from the broken tube (high marks in this, because you have to think about the detail very well). Just some suggestions to make it more realistic, IMO. Aside from that, you did a nice job with creative, funny idea, good luck

(5 years and 3542 days ago)

Stop, Please!
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langstrum says:

I'm thinking about peacocks, very colorful feathers

(5 years and 3542 days ago)

Love Story 2010
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langstrum says:

I like the interaction between them and the connections in detail (you did them very carefully). The idea is also lovely. What I don't like much is the design of these robots but I didn't figure out why they are not attractive much to me (maybe too much detail on the hands and necks are quite distracting). I suggest to make more shadows, especially around the eyes and do something with the background, it's quite boring now. Overall, that's the nice effort and wish you the best luck !

(5 years and 3542 days ago)

In your eyes...
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langstrum says:

a strange style . good luck, author

(5 years and 3543 days ago)

First project
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langstrum says:

Seems like your learning is very fast. Brilliant!

(5 years and 3543 days ago)

Re-Generation
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langstrum says:

Only one artist here can do this . It's nice to see your new entry. Amazing as usual. Another winning entry for sure

(5 years and 3544 days ago)

Confusion
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langstrum says:

Really good !!! However, you provided the really hi quality Hi-Res, so I can see some mistake, especially the area between the land and the bowl. You can use the brush to make it look better (now it's still like cut and paste). Also, to make the realistic image of the scenery behind the glass bowl, you have to distort the image in the glass bowl (the glass bowl is nearly global, so no image goes through it can keep the original shape. Just refer to some real image, you can find out how you should distort that. Overall, this work is very impressive.

(5 years and 3545 days ago)

Far from Home
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langstrum says:

Because of your unique style, voting is not needed to know the author. Fantastic work and very realistic

(5 years and 3545 days ago)

USS-13042010
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langstrum says:

The third generation . Nice try . I don't need to see the SBS because you can make that with anything B-)

(5 years and 3545 days ago)

dirty tank
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langstrum says:

I guess that's you . Simple but very nice, especially color and looks cartoonish . Good luck ^^!

(5 years and 3546 days ago)

Up and Away
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langstrum says:

C.O.N.G.R.A.T.S

(5 years and 3547 days ago)

Flower girl
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langstrum says:

You translation is excellent, man and your "innovation" in that work pushes you to the next level

(5 years and 3547 days ago)

The Sweet Container of Life
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langstrum says:

Don't need voting to reveal the author. Fabulous

(5 years and 3548 days ago)

Crystal
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langstrum says:

I'm sure It was shot after the egg . Awesome again

(5 years and 3549 days ago)

Why wont you start!?
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langstrum says:

One of your best entries ever , and I saw who is the author before voting . Good luck ^^!

(5 years and 3550 days ago)

Flower girl
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langstrum says:

A kind of Photoshop comedy , ,very good

(5 years and 3551 days ago)

HEHE...
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langstrum says:

Could use as a fairy tale movie poster. Very attractive. Mario mush be proud of his birthday . Good luck, author

(5 years and 3551 days ago)

Magical Land
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langstrum says:

They shouldn't have the blur effect to be the correct high speed motion photography

(5 years and 3551 days ago)

Rocket Strike
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langstrum says:

This is off-theme because the high speed motion photography is not accurately understood. Let see other comment of mine, you will know why I said that: http://www.pxleyes.com/photoshop-picture/4bbc16b3d1a92/Running-on-water.html

(5 years and 3551 days ago)

Broken Glass
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langstrum says:

The idea is not good, because author misunderstood the concept of high speed motion photography. With this technique, the camera can take photo with the speed of 128 frames/s and even much higher. Presume we use this speed, so this photo was captured within 1/128s. Calculate from the first image of this person to the last image on the left, he "joggled"around 2m --> his speed is around 2m per 1/128s or 256m/s or 921km/h, that means 0.7 sound speed . Just the funny demonstration, hope that author will understand this concept correctly. For that matter, you should capture the image of only one person in this photo, so no different between the normal photo and high speed motion photo can be observed, this is why the target of high speed motion photo is always the object moving with the ultra high speed such as the bullet.
EIDT: Oops, this is a lady

(5 years and 3551 days ago)

Running on water (revised)
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langstrum says:

I like clown fish and I like this work, too. Simple but effective. How about adding some bubbles? This will be more convincing, I think. Good luck

(5 years and 3552 days ago)

Clown Fish
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langstrum says:

Your main problem is the source for the fly is the photo with shallow DOF but the frog's one is not. Imagine that if you place anything behind the fly, it will become blurred (so your image is wrong in term of DOF, Depth of Field). You can fix that by blurring all the area behind the fly or re-create the blurring part of the fly (mush tougher). However, the idea is very good

(5 years and 3552 days ago)

Lunch
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langstrum says:

Some cracks and the reddish glowing on top of the bulb are some thing probably appear . Nice concept and well executed! Good luck author

(5 years and 3552 days ago)

Match Bulb
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langstrum says:

I can recognize your drawing before voting. Really like the idea and the snake's expression. I have one small observation is the scale texture is not fitted with the snake shape. Good luck!

(5 years and 3552 days ago)

Hopeless Romantic
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langstrum says:

It's better because the space between the two faces are not blank now. However, what I suggested is you can make the wide gradient on the line between day and night. The sudden change from night to day just separate them. Anyway, just IMO . Keep practicing, you will be much better

(5 years and 3553 days ago)

Far but together... (updated)
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langstrum says:

I love this idea . Maybe if you make a gradual transition between day and night, this could be more harmony. Also the eyes need more contrast, let make them the center of your image. Good luck, author

(5 years and 3553 days ago)

Far but together... (updated)
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langstrum says:

Congrats you too ^^

(5 years and 3553 days ago)

Little House of Horrors
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langstrum says:

I'll be surprised if this work isn't on top. You're crazy, cleverly crazy

(5 years and 3553 days ago)

Last egg "standing"
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langstrum says:

Agree with Anna, also I suggest you to make the bottom of the sky brighter, while darken the ground and the cats' backs a bit. You have two choices for the shadow: if the brightness of the sun increase, you can make the longer shadow by distorting the one you already created, or cast the light on the heads of the cats and the shadows are small, almost disappeared (because the sun doesn't enlighten this place). I also like this cuties, and this is very encouraging as your first drawing. Good luck

(5 years and 3553 days ago)

Cats (updated)
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langstrum says:

so funny

(5 years and 3555 days ago)

memo
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langstrum says:

yummy yummy, I wish hereisanoop's wish doesn't come true, because it's my place

(5 years and 3556 days ago)

natural food
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langstrum says:

I understand your situation and I also don't want to keep the psd file with merged layer. In my case, I made the second psd file and merge all layers, taking risk and added something more. Maybe we need to take control of layers more efficiently, sometime it brought headache to me also

(5 years and 3556 days ago)

Rise