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langstrum says:

Yes, much better. You can improve even more in some details: (1) to make the DOF more shallow, you need to blur the fence layer a little bit, so the main plane will be on the face of the horse. (2) Instead of Gaussian blur, you should use lens blur, which have the blur pattern similar to the real lense, and don't forget to add a small amount of noise, (3) in photography, you should avoid the continuous horizon because it cut your photo into 2 pieces, so you can make one more layer of something to disrupt this horizon (I mean the fence)

(5 years and 3581 days ago)

On The Farm
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langstrum says:

Looked almost photography, except the house, the part behind the horse should be blurred, instead of the right part.

(5 years and 3582 days ago)

On The Farm
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langstrum says:

Great portrait! I agree with rocketdog85, but it's difficult to be solved because the tighter crop will reduce the warm atmosphere for the face (the pink coat is very fit in this situation, I think)

(5 years and 3582 days ago)

Beautiful Spirit
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langstrum says:

you can do that to ANY contest, just put the source somewhere and make it disappeared, lol

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Lovers Leap
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langstrum says:

I think you need to work more on extracting the target and shadowing them in the context

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Rehearsal
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langstrum says:

nice try, but I think the higher tree branch should be behind the wing or you can delete that one. Moreover, the bush also needs the shadow as the man standing in front. The opacity of the tree is quite low, so it's not stick to the scenery. GL

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

The Final Fly
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langstrum says:

the best so far

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

silence
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langstrum says:

Now it looked like a painting. Wonderful!

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Energy Gathering
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langstrum says:

well deserved the first place, congratulation!

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Strawberry vase
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langstrum says:

I see the glowing effect in some areas makes the composition of this robot less connective, especially the foot. Overall, it's quite good

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Rise of the Robots
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langstrum says:

Wow, congratulation on your first place. I finished my dragon almost the same time that you submitted this work (I intended to name it as Candy Dragon, then I had to change to Fire Dragon because of this one, lol)

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

DRAGON CANDY
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langstrum says:

the background is quite boring but I like the red tone. Nice construction, GL

(5 years and 3583 days ago)

Erizus II
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langstrum says:

Author, the reflection is not right, just the reflection of the image underneath the heel is enough

(5 years and 3584 days ago)

Dreamheels
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langstrum says:

'You don't love a woman because she is beautiful, but she is beautiful because you love her.'. She's obviously beautiful, so how can you interprete this quote? However, this is the great portrait photo, well done.

(5 years and 3585 days ago)

You...
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langstrum says:

waw, nice composition and color tone. I like it. Good luck, author

(5 years and 3585 days ago)

Chains
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langstrum says:

Congratulation!!!

(5 years and 3586 days ago)

Captured
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langstrum says:

The blending is smooth and the tone is very reasonably, well done.

(5 years and 3586 days ago)

Ammonia
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langstrum says:

The shadow of the second dolphin from the left is not fit to the context, it's rather be on the left of the dolphin than being like this. However, it looked great!

(5 years and 3586 days ago)

Dolphin playground
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langstrum says:

It's so funny )

(5 years and 3588 days ago)

topsy turtle
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langstrum says:

Even though the blend is not very good, but the concept and overall look is superb. Well done!

(5 years and 3591 days ago)

Smoking Camel