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langstrum says:

I was a bit surprised to find out that's your work. Yes, still the familiar style but this time I feel something different. In this work you focused more on the composition and lighting, with not much details. All the curves were well done, but the hairs need a bit more works. I don't know if that's your design or not but her bright hand has frog-like shape. It's a gorgeous piece of art indeed! Will be in top place for sure!

(5 years and 3203 days ago)

Fairy met her playmate.,,
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The main focus of this image is on the face and you chose the soft, less detail brush for the rest, so if I were you I would draw the hair strands with large, soft brush and not clearly separated as you did. Even though these hairs are still nice, they distract the eyes a bit to the top left corner of the image. Overall, I can see your effort and this portrait has a soul, which is the most important one. Good luck to you.

(5 years and 3203 days ago)

Haley Joel Osment
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langstrum says:

Very nice drawing my friend, I can recognize her immediately. The eyes and hairs took you a lot of time, I guess. There are many ways to pain the hairs, maybe you can try, they can reduce the time needed. Also, if you use the realistic approach, some highlights on the skin, mouth, eyes are always good . Best of luck to you!

(5 years and 3203 days ago)

nicole kidman
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langstrum says:

Congrats on the third place.
And that's great to see you back.

(5 years and 3231 days ago)

Playground Battle
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langstrum says:

You almost touch the first place, very beautiful entry, way to go my friend!

(5 years and 3231 days ago)

Hoping
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langstrum says:

Congrats buddy on another victory

(5 years and 3231 days ago)

Pet no. 13
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langstrum says:

You prompt me to learn Painter, it's excellent in creating the realistic media. I thought you submitted a traditional work at the first sight lol. Absolutely awesome drawing!
Maybe you can add a bit more shadow of the vase on the ground, they look not really connected.

(5 years and 3237 days ago)

Flowers and Vase
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langstrum says:

You really know how to emphasize the focus of your image. The square frame and the color scheme are wise choices, and I like the ant, too, nice touch! Good luck to you, artist

(5 years and 3237 days ago)

pomegranates flower
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langstrum says:

Congrats!

(5 years and 3244 days ago)

beauty
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langstrum says:

Congrats for the first place!

(5 years and 3244 days ago)

Pin-up Girl
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langstrum says:

Great source searching and great half tone of colors

(5 years and 3250 days ago)

Pin-up Girl
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langstrum says:

I ♥ Brains, don't ♥ Zombies, but we all ♥ gotmeamuse. Congrats and cheers!!

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

Zombie Love
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langstrum says:

Congrats on your 3rd place Dek, I like this style and the story I can imagine behind it ^^

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

home
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langstrum says:

Congrats on your second place Steve, hope to see more entries like that in Pxleyes

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

Snow Day
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langstrum says:

I even like this one better than the Doubled Crossed. Maybe it's just the personal impression but I see you, your face, in every portrait entries of yours, that's so interesting.

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

Queen of Hearts
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langstrum says:

Jade, you can be the expert in designing tattoo, I'm sure . I was also surprised to reveal that's you who made this work, but it's reasonable. Keep going on, this is the best medium for your talent, I think . And congrats for the bifecta, you're dominating this place!

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

Double Crossed
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langstrum says:

Congrats Mr.Waz, another great art in your gallery. I expected much higher score tho. Hope to see you more in the future contests.

(5 years and 3252 days ago)

Sandy Clowes is coming to town
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langstrum says:

That's so surprising for me to find your entry here, seems like you worked for that piece a long time and this contest is the perfect place for submitting whatever you like to do . Fav immediately and high marks. But, let me give some strict critiques (even though I consider it's a kind of perfect entry). In perspective, the positions of her legs are not much different (the right one is a bit closer to us) but, to me, their proportions are different considerably, the right boot is quite longer. About Santa's "poster", seems like the piece in her hand is from the one on the wall, but I can't find they're fitted together (just if my presumption is correct). About lighting, definitely you used a complex lighting mode, with the strongest direct light from her back, but the light comes from her front is not very well managed when we consider the shadows. Base on the shadow on the bottom of the picture in her hand, the light comes from her front but lower than her hand, base on the shadow under her skirt, the light come from the position higher than her skirt. So, the front light is from somewhere as high as her belly! From that conclusion, you need more shadows, such as the shadow of the picture on her left arm, some shadows on the other side of the gun, etc. And the most important thing is her second shadow on her back, which is not as dark as the main shadow, but should be more convincing.
Phew, finally I showed you all that I can find here, hope it's not frustrating to you . You'll get one more first place for sure, even among the top work of the site .

(5 years and 3256 days ago)

Sandy Clowes is coming to town
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langstrum says:

Very convincing scenery! The orange bird is a nice touch on the cold background.
The shadow of the tree on the snow around the bird is discontinued from the other shadow, you can consider it for the further improvement.
Very nice job!

(5 years and 3261 days ago)

Snow Day
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langstrum says:

Congrats Elke, I missed this contest. You did such a wonderful job, rich in details, and you should get more points for the thought you put in and the research on mandala .

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Wheel of seasons
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langstrum says:

That's cruel! Different sources were brought together quite smoothly and you paid some attentions to the detail such as changing the colors on the house. However, I have some suggestions for you:
1. If you want to focus on the two people and the house, they should be the main objects, so their shapes, colors, etc. should be noticeable compared with the environment. Consider that, the sky and the fire should be more desaturated and brighter in color, you can also blur them slightly to make the better depth (including the road and the hill).
2. Applying the motion blur is a nice touch but your choice of object is not right. The flight is so far away from the ground, so their movement is slow compared to other actions or movements on the ground and close to the camera. The camera has to capture the image within several seconds to see that effect, but in this case, the remaining parts of the image will be overbrighten and almost nothing will be seen. Just apply that filter to something close to the camera and move very fast compared with the others .
3. Let see the shadow of the house, it's sharp, so the shadow of the soldier should be the same .
Hope that my comment is helpful to you. Good luck!

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

The execution.
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langstrum says:

That's not surprised to me, author, because I also realized that your style is unique and stable through all of your entries. Your ideas behind the entries easily impress people and your execution is clever. As far as this entry is concerned, you achieved your goal for sure. Even though this contest will be full of mermaids, maybe I won't see any spooky mermaid like that again because that's too difficult to compete with you . I just have a suggestion of increasing the brightness of the whole scene for people to appreciate more what you've done. Best of luck to you
EDIT: Oops, I'm sorry, sometimes siren is depicted as a kind of mermaid but in general they are distinctive.

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

Evil Siren
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langstrum says:

I don't see any problem with this entry, your approach is very artistic, I like it . Surrealism is the way to show the world through the eyes of the artists. I immediately though about the agriculture and the connection between the mankind and the nature, we're just living things as the trees or animals. I like the color, the choice of background and the soil-like things flying from the bottom, nice touch. No need to change anything, good luck author

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

rising
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langstrum says:

Wow wow wow, the eye expert jumped in o.O. Love to see your work again, author. Top work for sure

(5 years and 3326 days ago)

An Eye
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langstrum says:

Congrats Lamantine!!!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Play with me...
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langstrum says:

Congrats Pearlie, I saw you share the same interest with the mechanics things as me . That's the great job with many details, you should spend long time for searching the sources and put them well together.

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

My Lab to Another Dimension
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langstrum says:

Congrats again Chad !

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Bear Factory
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langstrum says:

Wow, wonderful, I though it was from Spaceranger, that's not your usual style, but still fantastic. Congrats Arca on your win and the high score!!!!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

To Own the Stars
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langstrum says:

That's why you're artist, love your style

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Elegance
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langstrum says:

Congrats on your fourth place, even though it's not in the top 3, it showed your artistic mind and beautiful execution. Well done, keep going!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Silent Night
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langstrum says:

Congrats Marco on the next level of success in Pxleyes, keep it up buddy!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

The Armored Dragon
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langstrum says:

Congrats Cornelia on your second place. This competition is tough but also the good place to show off your talent.

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Froggy
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langstrum says:

Finally, yes, finally the glorious victory is in your hand now . Hearty congrats my friend, you should be proud of this win

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

thief
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langstrum says:

Congrats Mircea

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

gram-top
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langstrum says:

Really awesome construction, congrats!

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

DYNETHIRI
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langstrum says:

Congrats Genuine2009, that's nice to see you back with 3D contests

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

SteamPunk R2D2
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langstrum says:

Congrats Roon, but you're deserved the better score, I think

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

force
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langstrum says:

Congrats Phill, so now I have one more painting to learn from, thank you so much for joining this contest.

(5 years and 3329 days ago)

Death: Facing Fate
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langstrum says:

Wow wow, great and funny image, exact your style, and totally deserves the place, congrats!

(5 years and 3330 days ago)

On The Farm
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langstrum says:

Double congrats

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

When We Think...
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langstrum says:

Congrats Matteo! Did you use the source of father and son before, it looks familiar?

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

There
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langstrum says:

I missed this contest, congrats to this lovely creation dear Loopy. I can tell exactly you did it just by the eye

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

Up..up..and away...
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langstrum says:

That's the unique work, not many people here can manage well the vector image as what you did. The arrangement of shapes, curves and colors is very well done. You must have the eyes of a designer. Nice looking and elegant image, congrats!

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

Goddess of Freedom
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langstrum says:

It looks very classic and somehow it doesn't have the digital looking in my eyes. Somehow the stroke on the top of the hammer was lost. Nice work in general, would be wonderful if you make the others. Good luck!

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

force
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langstrum says:

Great work, it took time for me to understand all the messages in this piece. The symbols of horoscope are easily recognized but I didn't think about the months at the first glace (silly me). And then I realized that you indicate the time by the change of the branch through 4 seasons. The four animals were chosen carefully because they belong to 4 domains of animal kingdom: invertebrate, fish, bird, mammal, not mention the mankind (maybe because I'm biologist lol). I just don't understand why you chose skeletons to make the image. Nice card and good luck to you.

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

Bone Tarot
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langstrum says:

That's so interesting to have two entries about the same card in this contest, but the approaches are on the opposite ways, one goes to heaven and one goes to hell, what a coincidence! About this work I love everything from the composition, colors and details, especially the river of zombie. The design of the angel is awesomely cool, I always want to make an angel like that. The words don't work well for me tho, and I think because of the constraint in time you decided to use them. Very nice, and high mark from me!

(5 years and 3331 days ago)

Death: Facing Fate
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langstrum says:

Wow, the blending is almost perfect! Is he a Satyr? Did he steal .. robots? The good thing about this work is it rises the question in viewer's mind about the story behind. I would use brush with a bit harder and brighter stroke to make the fur on his leg, it still looks quite blurry now. No more nitpick, and high mark from me !

(5 years and 3333 days ago)

thief
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langstrum says:

Not your usual style but very impressive and convincing, congrats!

(5 years and 3334 days ago)

Blank Ink Candles Fawn
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langstrum says:

That's great work, congrats Rakib!

(5 years and 3334 days ago)

candle eater spider
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langstrum says:

Congrats again, Marco, keep it up !!!!

(5 years and 3334 days ago)

Candlebot