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langstrum says:

Ditto CMYK46! The color of the monster works well with the yellow grass, but the man and the sky are too similar, which reduces the focus on the main character. I though that you make the warrior all from the contest source, but still the blending is very well. Just a minor change in the hand of the statue but it's brilliant! I don't know if others have the same though as mine or not, but the hilt of his sword seems too big to be handled IMHO (I know that you keep the right hand, the statue is holding something like a sword, but I think it's not the sword because every sword is fitted to the owner's hand ). Best of luck to you, author.

(5 years and 3360 days ago)

Ebony Warrior
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langstrum says:

Congrats mqtrf!

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

No way back
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langstrum says:

You should try using brush with small size (white brush), with scatter effect in the brush option and paint with different density around the area that you should see the water splashes, then the image will become more convincing . Nice idea! Good luck

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

Raging Water
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langstrum says:

My favorite theme, and you did it justice, and I like the animated SBS as well. Just my opinion, the pose is not really natural, such as the left knee and the right knee should be in different directions (don't take me wrong, author, you know me, right ?). I'm thinking about collaborating with you in making some sci-fi battles, that would be much of fun

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

UFO Attack...!!!
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langstrum says:

Very nice, it's the true anime work, but look like you didn't finish the right side . Good luck ^^

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

Red X
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langstrum says:

I like the dark stroke around her. Would be nice if it's in color. However, I'm still waiting for SBS for voting

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

Axe Girl
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langstrum says:

Very clean and convincing image, I like how you applied the color tone, too. One nitpick is about the shadow. It's easy to be fooled by the source image that the light comes from the left side because we can see something like the shadow of the fence just next to it, but I analyzed this image quite carefully and realized that there is no dominant direct light in this source, the dark area on the bridge is just the one people didn't walk on, so it's darker than the one in the middle of the bridge (the same thing to the opposite side of the bridge). I would say there is no problem with the light if I didn't see the source . However, what I suggest is not reducing this shadow, just amplifying what you have done by darkening the dark side of the fence, especially around the bottom part. All in all, it's just the nitpick IMO, author, the image is still really good

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

Waiting
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langstrum says:

Awesome! I'm not the old PST member but I this is the second time I see that work. Really love how you distorted the characters and make the realistic shadows, the idea is exceptional. One tiny thing is the white stroke around his mouth in the reflection seems shouldn't be there

(5 years and 3361 days ago)

Blown away
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langstrum says:

Congrats Space Ranger!!!

(5 years and 3363 days ago)

Royal Imperial Guardian
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langstrum says:

Congrats buddy, maybe you should make a collection of your monsters one day

(5 years and 3364 days ago)

wAaat U LooKiNN Attt...!!???
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langstrum says:

Hope what erathion said will become true, very nice work buddy!

(5 years and 3364 days ago)

wAaat U LooKiNN Attt...!!???
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langstrum says:

Nice tattoo, I feel curious about the girl than the box . Good source hunting, but the brightness on her left arm doesn't fit the darkness around. Good luck

(5 years and 3366 days ago)

Let Your Curiosity Guide You
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langstrum says:

Congrats Tucker, you're among the best surrealists in Pxleyes now

(5 years and 3367 days ago)

Floating Bench
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langstrum says:

the only thing I think you need to change is the shadow under the spider, it's too dark. Otherwise I admire this image

(5 years and 3367 days ago)

Spiderland
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langstrum says:

Very nice work and the Halloween mood is excellently achieved. Just one thing: check the reflection of the candle behind the pumpkin, it should be behind the reflection of the pumpkin.
EDIT: much better, good luck to you

(5 years and 3367 days ago)

Seasons Greetings
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langstrum says:

Very nice construction and quite convincing. I suggest to make the upper part of the "fan" (I don't know how to call it properly in English) brighter then the lower part, because the light reflections on the aircraft is quite strong on other part. Also, blurring the background a bit more will work better for the DOF. One remaining problem is now I know you and for some reason I'm sure it's your work, but you still need the SBS to prove your authority and follow the specific requirement of this contest. Good luck

EDIT: Very nice SBS (even though it should be called the construction guideline ). Hope you'll get a top 3 place with this work

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

Steampunk aircraft
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langstrum says:

Another awesome sci-fi image to your gallery, very well done . I think the small planet on the right can be blurred a bit (if it's a planet, but if it's just a small orbit near the ship, it's okie) and if I can see the reflection of the globe on the wings, that will be even more fantastic. Wish you the best luck

(5 years and 3368 days ago)

Royal Imperial Guardian
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langstrum says:

Congrats Glockman, welcome back

(5 years and 3370 days ago)

Pluto
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langstrum says:

Congrats, it's well deserved the place

(5 years and 3370 days ago)

Dick Dastardly
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langstrum says:

Congrats Erica

(5 years and 3370 days ago)

Betty Boop
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langstrum says:

Congrats

(5 years and 3370 days ago)

Magician
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langstrum says:

Why so funny? That's nice to see someone comes back with the comic look of Joker, other than the movie character. Great job, author !
EDIT: oops, I didn't watch The Simpsons, I'm sorry

(5 years and 3373 days ago)

Guess Who,
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langstrum says:

I didn't have any complain here, the image itself got the high score from me, and more "wow" and compliments are not needed because many people will do that. However, no one's perfect and I just gave my opinion about what can be done better. I'm glad that author received my comments very positively, and if author is the good chopper, he/she will know which part of my comment is reasonable and helpful.
@Dekwid: langstrum came from Pippi Langstrumpf or Pippi Longstocking, a character from the Swedish children's book of Astrid Lindgren. She is very famous with her personality, in many countries. I just like her name when I listened to the song "Hey Pippi Langstrumpf" when I was a child (didn't even know that's girl's name) and I simplified Langstrumpf to Langstrum. I read the book later and in love with this character too, so I keep it as my nickname until now. Thank you for asking

(5 years and 3373 days ago)

Haiku Spring
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langstrum says:

I understand your problem with the face, but we can make the shadow even with the white object. You can achieve that by using a layer with multiply blending setting, then pick the color on her face and select the dark color on the color palette by go down to the right (on the curve from top left to the bottom right). You can draw the shadow on her face by soft, low opacity brush on that layer, it won't disturb anything.
Do you notice the light on the grasses, the sunlight is quite yellow, so you can do the same thing to the kimono and the face. If I were you, I will use a layer with Color blending mode and use the bright yellow color to paint the highlight on the parts which mostly expose to the sun light, so the character will pop out more from the scene.
About the hair, just the brighter brushes on the front side of the hair are needed, the hair can be dark behind her.
Great to see the quick update and the image now is much improved.

(5 years and 3374 days ago)

Haiku Spring
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langstrum says:

Never seen anything like that in Pxleyes. Very gorgeous and dynamic in both the pose and color. Even though the character looks painterly, still works quite well with the background. Lighting effect can be better, tho, if you work a bit more on the character like casting more highlight and shadow on the face (the face and hair are the two most flat parts) and costume. The hair can be more real if you combine brushes with different brightnesses. Very high mark from me!

(5 years and 3374 days ago)

Haiku Spring
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langstrum says:

You could find a real face and distort it. That's better because the skin on the face now is not fitted to the real body (but the eyes, nose and mouth are good). Also, her "decorations" could be replaced by the real things, it will be much more convincing. Still a good entry and eye catching, good luck
EDIT: I didn't know it's you

(5 years and 3376 days ago)

Betty Boop
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langstrum says:

Pretty good and funny, but I have to complain about the shoes, their angles are not fitted to the ground

(5 years and 3376 days ago)

Man, I
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langstrum says:

I love it, my friend, very cartoonish and cute design of character. Congrats again!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

BBM or Big Beautiful Mermaid
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langstrum says:

I love it, my friend, very cartoonish and cute design of character. Congrats again!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

BBM or Big Beautiful Mermaid
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langstrum says:

Predictable, but should have better score IMO. Congrats!!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Family Outing
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langstrum says:

Your creativity is very great, you win again even though it's not your familiar style , congrats!!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Another Brick In The Wall
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langstrum says:

Congrats Chad!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Future Cleaner
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langstrum says:

You're very good on making ads , congrats!!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Kabooza COCO
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langstrum says:

Congrats buddy!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Official artist
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langstrum says:

Congrats!!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Roots of Time
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langstrum says:

congrats Nasir, this entry is quite different from your usual style but still very awesome!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

Roots Horse
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langstrum says:

Congrats CMYK46, what a fantastic entry! and the thumb up/down result is fantastically dramatic too lol

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

CTHULHU!
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langstrum says:

Wow, coffee seahorse, absolutely deserve the first place, congrats ImmerVerloren!

(5 years and 3378 days ago)

hippocampus
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langstrum says:

I want one on my bed, I always dream about the Pxleyes deadline and I can't submit a full week work, my body is freeze and itchy lol. Love your humorous style

(5 years and 3388 days ago)

You`re Itching To Buy This!
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langstrum says:

No problem, I think, the horse even has no eye lol, but we're not working with photo, so they're all acceptable . Very nice work, author

(5 years and 3388 days ago)

The Hero
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langstrum says:

Congrats George!

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

Utah Desert
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langstrum says:

Congrats IRONCOW !!

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

Thats no Bull!!
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langstrum says:

I like it too, but maybe the glows around small "ships" are not necessary IMHO.

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

Touch Up and Repairs
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langstrum says:

Looks like this robot has no feet and left hand. Otherwise quite good in perspective

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

DD
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langstrum says:

Congrats Roon!

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

a terrified bird diver
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langstrum says:

Congrat Ushurani!

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

Messy Rabbit Painter
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langstrum says:

Congrats Chad! Nice work, keep it up

(5 years and 3392 days ago)

sleepy bird pilot
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langstrum says:

I agree with the above comments, the only thing I want to add is the shadow on the branch seems to be against the shadow on the ground. Good luck!

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Utah Desert
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langstrum says:

Nice construction and I like the folds on the skin . However the painted grass seems to be too obvious, different from the real grass. Good luck, author !!

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Elephant
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langstrum says:

Great work, and I like most the idea. However, the perspective of the flower is not really correct to me, but still an awesome chop! Top work for sure!

(5 years and 3394 days ago)

Rust Fairy