The composition makes it hard to discern what your focal point is here, and the out of focus spheres do not help the eye determine that.

Congrats!

congrats ! very close

I have a big issues with the headphones with cable they don't last long. And where is z player hanged or put in our pokers or what???

Fantastic

cool render

Very nice design

cool ,gl

nice attitude..... this is the place where ur work is gng to judge worldwide. and if u dnt want to judge then simple dnt upload it.

Author is GR8............. Salaaam hai.....

If you allready say you dont like it.. why would anyone else like it? even if you dont like it.. dont say that LOL

and mossy is just trying to help you improve if you just wanna upload 5 minute woks on the go then i dont understand why you participate in a contest... ur images are goign to be stored in ur profile page.. if u ever wanna do something graphically it could actualy help you get a job by using this as a showcase... just saying....

if even you don't like this, why have you uploaded it?

The lighting is weird, since the moons are reflecting a light source that, from appearances, should be emanating from the DNA strand, but the strand is so dark. You should light the DNA so that it is the light source, instead of being a dark shadowy thing.

woah!! cool

great work...GL

Good job man! congratulations =D

Fab

hot classical goodluck

Author Gud work done but there is a major defect..as u said that u never played pool before so its obvius that u wud not know abt it....
In pool board the pockets don't protrude out like that..the way u have made it...the pockets should be aligned with the corner beams....the faulty positioning of the corner pockets are not so visible but the middle pockets are not supposed to be like that...have a look at some of the pool board images on the internet...u will sure figure it out what i am supposed to mean...gud luck friend...god bless you

Hey this is really good. I have never used any 3d programs what so ever, but I do play pool at least 5 times a week. the shadows and highlights don't seem right to me... other wise this is great! I may use it as a desktop image if that is ok with you?....

Great work author, GL

Nice work, the bottle is so clear but I am unsure on the cloth

Wow! Great render! Specially on the bottle... Anyway I'm not sure about the cloth though.. It appears transparent or something like that and it sort of ruins the great concept for me personally.. I don't know if it's just the material you used or something else.. This is just my opinion anyway.. it's still a fab render !

Great work author, we would all like to know how you created this!! Please provide SBS for this image. Any problems, visit the Q&A section.