3 comments received ( finished contests only ):
avatar wazowski
wazowski says:

The idea is kind of funny (woman's reaction), but the horse makes the scene too serious. Now I think, poor horsey, he's killed .... If it was something like a unicorn it was still kind of cruel but more in a fantasy way/surrealistic, I think it would have looked more like black humor. Just my opinion though. Good luck!

(5 years and 2943 days ago)

oops..killed it
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Author, you have until the contest ends tomorrow to post a revision.

(5 years and 2945 days ago)

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avatar erikuri
erikuri says:

Ok, let's make believe it's a mini ponney (smaller than a ponney).
Nice image (a bit cruel, but nice)

(5 years and 2945 days ago)

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ps.robgd says:

I think the ponney is too little. Good use of the source image.

(5 years and 2945 days ago)

oops..killed it
avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good image, but either she's too big or the horse is too small.

(5 years and 2945 days ago)

oops..killed it
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Keiley22 says:

sbs?
Other than that the girl on the floor seems flat..... it might be the background choice, can you find something smaller for a ground surface? the cracks are too big. Also her dress needs a bit of attention, while I understand fading out her spirit, i would suggest to make her actual body more solid to stand out.

(5 years and 3087 days ago)

died of loneliness
avatar mazanda
mazanda says:

SBS ?

(5 years and 3088 days ago)

died of loneliness