I don't really think that your class is thick like this. In my opinion, if I explain your problems, and give some advices how to make better, you learn more, as if I make a comment like above, about how good is.

So I explain why isn't correct this scene, and you should remember my advises in the future.

The main problem is that everything is thick, this could be adjusted easily, just have to notice it.

The second problem is the sharp of the edges, use chamfer tool on every edges that are too close to camera.

Use texture on models, CGTtextures is full of textures of all the genres, and it's free. Nearly every texture has at least a minimal reflection, don't forget this, your floor will be much more realistic with a blurry reflection, under the right window.

Best wishes.

The first problem is i think the color of the walls. Why is tha left wall yellow?

You should create with line tool a cable at least for the keyboard.

Your edges are too sharp, always use on it chamfer tool, 1 cm 2 segments.

The lights are ok, but the textures has no reflections.

If this is really one of your first 3d model than I would like to congratulate.

There are some problems, but if you have less then 50 hours experience this work is the very best.

Let's start with the main problem, this table can not be presented in a simple white or black background render. Here you should put this table near a wall textued with white tiles... it would be much more natural.

I think you used scanline render or maybe mental ray, but you do not checked the shadow option, so your models seems to be levitating instead of being in the table.

If you do not remember something, you should search something similar on google, this is totally legal.

I hade made some major problems in modelling, if you want some advices how to make things easier, contact me.

Best wishes.

You should use some reflections on the materials, the models are quite simple, but it's quite ok.

I think this entry was off topic.

Your shadows are too sharp, the mouse and keyboard has unreal shapes, the keyborad should be more wide, and the mouse is too small. The shaders are incorrect too, never use fully black color, in the real word isn't full black color.

Don't forget to use chamfer too, don't let the edges to be sharp like hell. Dirt map will help to make your materials more realistic, try to use it.

Can you explain the rule of the basic teapot at this scene?

The texture of the wall is too big, I do not saw any bump on it, the teapot has no material at all, the most realistic is the match.

Try practicing the materials, even if you have good models, if the shaders are shitty, the whole scene will be unreal.

The woman in the picture is your photo? If not you are able to use it?

Nice work, the color correction is really intimate.

The materials at the propeller and in the tyres are incorrect, the propeller does not have any reflection, and in the tyer, is too sharp. The lights are ok. The model is good too, but that is not your work, so do not count.

I think there are some problems with the textures, first the asphalt texture is wrapped horizontally, but the main problem is with the texture of the car, it is too matte, I saw your first version of it, and there were much greater textures on it.

I don't really like the way that you used the lights, and the little waterdrops are too similar and/or regular. The bottle is ok, and I like the logo on it.

The material of the umbrella is quiet saturated, you could apply on it a color filter in ps, and the shadow is too sharp, watch the shadow of the moped, it is much more blurrier.

"The Picture MUST be taken outside and it MUST be raining, not just a cloudy day."

For me it seem like a simple cloudy day, otherwise the picture is great, but a little bit off topic.

this shot totally gives the feeling that this is an old ancient shelf.

It gives a very strange feeling about, the dungeons

nice shot, the lighting is perfect

I like the repeat of the trees, the green colour is nice, and gives a little sad mood to the picture.

Super shot, great colour harmony, nice idea, great realization.

wonderful shot, i can't imagine how u created the falling water drops, grat.

The idea was ok, a little bit similar with mine's, but this is another perception. With this background the whole picture seems a little bit amateur, You should use a dark sheet, in the right side of the monitor, for background, to felt the artistic way of this picture.

erathion, can i ask you why do you comment the same thing for the whole entries? You are a talented user, if you like something i think you could write down why do you prefer that work.

beautiful, i try this filter in my pictures too

wow, beautiful colour

suuper shot grat

i think it's so usual, you can play with the lights

There should be very dark ) the picture is noisy, but one of the bests. Garat. the light areperfect.

oldtimer these types will won here

unbealivable shot, notthe car is in the main focus, but i like it!

I saw this photo somewhere, in i wrote there too that is wonderful

it seems like a vulcan in the deep

I like the perspective

like a frame from a film

wow, big grat for the author, it's funny, the SBS, i think i cant guess never that u used a sponge for ground

I dont really understand first what u want to imagine, after the sbs i was enlightened

) very big idea ) with the chocolate , and the lightning, grat

My opinion is that here is too much the black, and do not happen anything. You should imagine a scene with these "animals"

I like the idea ) first i thought that is a real picture.

the whole frame is filled, i like it, there are no unnecessary space

nice trick ) good idea, good result

simple and creative, but the left downside of the picture is a little bit boring.

It"s a nice "colourful" picture, one colour, but that is the dominating colour, and it"s good positioned, not the center, but yet )

With a little higher contrast the shadow should be stronger, and i think it would be better.

This picture gives me a very good idea, to my shadow topic, i just have to wait for the sun.

Nice pic, but it"s a little bit boring, you should use something + in the back, in which the shadow has a different effect.

the red numbers gives something + that makes the picture awareness

This pic is a little bit simple, but the strange contrast is interesting

This should be the most dramatic piano lesson in the world ) but the picture is ok.

I don't know what means that key, but the orange colour is interesting. You should raise a little bit the contrast, to highlight more the orange buttons with the strange colour.

Grat, for this shot.

wonderful landscape