nice mixed media,good luck!

you could put a shadow under the turtle if you want to ground him a bit (not too dark, just a gauss blurred disk underneath him blended into the grass, also your hand drawn lines are awesome.. (you can see them great in HIGH RES) you might want to think about doing the same thing to the background, trace around the edges of the trees with the same type of lines.. just a thought, something I would do to make it look entirely like a cartoon.. love the shading on the turtle... as always IMHO

EDIT: GREATLY IMPROVED.. it really looks like a story book illustration now.. good luck author and good work!!!

The linework outline of the turtle is very choppy and crude. You might want to smooth is some.

dat's a perty one.. woo hoo

Fantastic job!

good luck

nice one

I agree with Chalty; I thought of something trying to reach the bed...

Are those lights above the bed? If so the perspective is off, instead of being above the bed they look like they are crawling to bed.

Very creative thinking! The bed looks good but the rest around it makes the image worse.